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Array ( [sid] => 131103 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => IT'S OK. [time] => 2007-01-28 14:16:27 [hometext] => Wrote this last night after another petty argument with the women i live with, and after a phone call from my friend charley... she was crying again cuz the place where she lives is screwing her up. i just though i'd write about all the things that hurt [bodytext] => i don't want to live
but it's ok
cuz i-know-i'll-fail
if i try again

echoes scream
but it's ok
i don't care
that i'm going insane

flash backs soar
but it's ok
i can see the door
but the key's missing!

i can't cry
but it's ok
i'm no good if i'm sad
any-way

mum is dead
but it's ok
the cancer went into her head
and she died in pain

my voice feels lost
but it's ok
i'm on a detox
and i'm NOT ok

... and i don't want to live
but IT'S OK
cuz i will fail
if i try again! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 32 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

IT'S OK.

Contributed by deathdrop on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 02:16:27 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

i don't want to live
but it's ok
cuz i-know-i'll-fail
if i try again

echoes scream
but it's ok
i don't care
that i'm going insane

flash backs soar
but it's ok
i can see the door
but the key's missing!

i can't cry
but it's ok
i'm no good if i'm sad
any-way

mum is dead
but it's ok
the cancer went into her head
and she died in pain

my voice feels lost
but it's ok
i'm on a detox
and i'm NOT ok

... and i don't want to live
but IT'S OK
cuz i will fail
if i try again!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2007-01-28 14:16:27]
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Re: IT'S OK. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 05:04:53 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful and emotional write.. it gives you that sense of "i am going to give up" but its a very well expressed piece sometimes things make people feel there is no hope

vampyress Jenni

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