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You disappear into the night, till the next day
It seems that you’re always holding back things you have to say
I just wish you’d shine just a little ray
Of information for me to make this better

I can see this relationship go downhill
As each day passes, it gets damaged and bruised
Crying out for a cure
It doesn’t need a band aid to cover the wound
Because only more feelings will be hidden, not revealed and shown
Sometimes I feel the urge to pick up that phone
Just to hear your voice and tone
After I’d tell you and you’d tell me everything
Everything that’s needs to be known, that needs to be shown

There’s always just that one question
If I’ll ever understand what you’re feeling
And if you’ll every understand what I’m feeling
But that’ll never be known, if we don’t show and tell these hidden emotions

So here’s the time
Tell me and I’ll tell you
Confess
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Confess

Contributed by the_young_poet on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:04:01 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Night falls as the sun fades away
You disappear into the night, till the next day
It seems that you’re always holding back things you have to say
I just wish you’d shine just a little ray
Of information for me to make this better

I can see this relationship go downhill
As each day passes, it gets damaged and bruised
Crying out for a cure
It doesn’t need a band aid to cover the wound
Because only more feelings will be hidden, not revealed and shown
Sometimes I feel the urge to pick up that phone
Just to hear your voice and tone
After I’d tell you and you’d tell me everything
Everything that’s needs to be known, that needs to be shown

There’s always just that one question
If I’ll ever understand what you’re feeling
And if you’ll every understand what I’m feeling
But that’ll never be known, if we don’t show and tell these hidden emotions

So here’s the time
Tell me and I’ll tell you
Confess

Copyright Â© the_young_poet ... [ 2007-01-27 23:04:01]
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Re: Confess (User Rating: 1 )
by ferasdour on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:55:46 PM AEST
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if one writes a poem there is nothing more needed to be confessed. besides, confessing is to much work.

i enjoyed this poem.

Re: Confess (User Rating: 1 )
by inlovewithaladd on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:56:08 AM AEST
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this was enjoyable, though not excellent. i think it's lacking the use of all senses, though that could really be more my taste in poetry than anything else. thank you for writing!

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