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Array ( [sid] => 131073 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Once & Future Mistakes... [time] => 2007-01-27 19:48:12 [hometext] => Philosotry... [bodytext] => It is said that beneath the midnight sun~

where memories of the future are had

The strangeness of knowable fates begun~

within the reality deemed as mad...

There through one day might all tomorrows pass~

in an untime bound parade that stands still

While an army of all yesterdays amass~

to confront this repetition of their ills...

Faced with mirrored reflection, patterns break out~

& the present resumes in its confusion

Midnight sun lunacy is feared about~

in want of sharing this delusion...

Yet when history from, we refuse to learn~

the very ills of, live on as our bane

And by the ones choosing to in this hell burn~

the prophets of consequence are named insane...

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Once & Future Mistakes...

Contributed by misfitme on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 07:48:12 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

It is said that beneath the midnight sun~

where memories of the future are had

The strangeness of knowable fates begun~

within the reality deemed as mad...

There through one day might all tomorrows pass~

in an untime bound parade that stands still

While an army of all yesterdays amass~

to confront this repetition of their ills...

Faced with mirrored reflection, patterns break out~

& the present resumes in its confusion

Midnight sun lunacy is feared about~

in want of sharing this delusion...

Yet when history from, we refuse to learn~

the very ills of, live on as our bane

And by the ones choosing to in this hell burn~

the prophets of consequence are named insane...

Copyright © misfitme ... [ 2007-01-27 19:48:12]
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Re: Once & Future Mistakes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 07:49:40 PM AEST
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Great poem. Excellent writing.

Re: Once & Future Mistakes... (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 09:17:55 PM AEST
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I've been watching out for you...I keep reading your writing, and each time, I end up speechless. So, this comment is really just to let you know that I love your words, and think you have wonderful depth.

Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx

Re: Once & Future Mistakes... (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 10:00:27 PM AEST
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...Or werewolves either way they maybe hunted in histories past, burned at the stake or made into one. Very captivating, entrancing, with a finger snap to remember everything.

Bravo

Peace
AJ

Re: Once & Future Mistakes... (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 10:53:42 PM AEST
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Ooooo Kerry, What a little gem you have here. I really dug that last stanza. Very complex piece.
Thank you for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Once & Future Mistakes... (User Rating: 1 )
by inlovewithaladd on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:36:29 AM AEST
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i like the abstraction here.

Re: Once & Future Mistakes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 04:40:50 PM AEST
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See now my dear MissyMe that not only I, but also my other fellow poets look forward to reading your wonderful poetry. With incredible depth you reach out to your reader and they connect to you through ur words.
Well done sweet Moon Maiden~
I'm one hooked fan.
love ya,
sue m

Re: Once & Future Mistakes... (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 10:39:24 PM AEST
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This is lovely, do deep and thoughtful. Filled with vission and wisdom you so materfully know how to put into words.

Ben

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