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[aid] => mick
[title] => YPDC Club House
[time] => 2007-01-25 22:36:24
[hometext] => If you commented on my second 50, you're invited, you lucky, lucky ducks...
[bodytext] => Welcome to YPDC
your poetic community
where everybody sleeps past noon
but rise to gaze at mother moon
and party under the emystars
whose reflections draw Oohs and Ahhs….
Tattooed girls get my heart thump’n
and merry chicks get this joint jumpin
as Mexican mammas tap their toes
to the chorus of ‘The Broken Rose’
while Cajun sweeties, eyes aglow
hope that there are vibes to go
Off the dance floor, romanticists
tell wild tales none can resist
femme fatales and vampire queens
ensconced in vivid Gothyk scenes
make Faustian pacts where poems are sold
before the author’s dark and cold
and caged souls share a metal hell
with tongues that lash but cannot spel (sic)
party crashers from afar
sail in from the nearest star
'to come in peace and bring much bliss'
from their planet, Xynobis
bearing lost relics as a gift
and offer MGAKelazzo90 a lift
Quarrels and cross-talk in the kitchen
Flio and Rachel won’t stop mix’n
as misfits and hippy chicks
speak their minds and take their licks
while Annelise, sweet Annelise
discusses war but hopes for peace
Gwen and Louisa drink alone
Colin Baker’s on the phone
sagacious Lionel, Jen, 54
quietly leave through the back door
Kayla, no saint, parties nude
but Frank’s so square he’s now a cube!
Archie, such a reprobate
hits on girls he used to date
while Benny -14 if a day
chases young Violet away
Beyond sunflowers and tea
here comes the dawn machinery
revealing what the poetess saw
nature red in tooth and claw
scorpions with haunted eyes
watch another great sunrise
while baron hawks deftly circle
the morning doves, ever so gentle
as wachumiri’s still their breath
to escape the raven’s death
and butterflies flap their wings
as the Kyarn warning bell
BRRIINGGS!!!
Some suicidal imbecile
threw a match in the woodpile
party’s over, Marisa’s sure
leads a Jackee-Line to the door
Rhymingron lays down a beat
while deadheads shrink from the heat
‘the roof, the roof, the roof is on fire!’
as wild flames and ash climb higher
GET YOUR PEANUTS AND CANDY SEARS!!
as memories are reduced to tears
Alas, the outlaw club is gone
farewell to our happy home
but as you leave, just remember
you can always be a ‘former member’
with artistic convictions unshakeable
and dreams, unbreakable
(Maestar - it’s alive!)
With thanks for taking the time to read and comment, to: Xynobis, Archie, Gothyk, Snemmers, Roxie, emystar, Louisa Montagn; Avarice Riot; Andrew; Rhymingron; Morning Dove; Dreamweaver; Sagacious; reflections; weeping dolphin; Lionel; xtcslilangel; Johnny P; Tena; NY Chick; Ladyfawn; wolfareen; wild-flame; Suicidal-Imbecile; Mexicomamma33; ravens_death;kyarn; cowboy poet; gwenevere; Punka Rach; priss; Jenni K; Sunflowersandtea; Carolina Blue; Beni; Unbreakable; David; levy metal; Vibes2go; Colin; Femme-Fatale; littlebit74;Cajun sweetie; Phil; Thebroknrose; lovestruckhippie; coni; gurl11; Maestar; reprobate; Romanticist; brew; Flio; Fielding88; DarkandCold; jigsma; Caged Soul; candy sears; Schmokin; Mr Peanut 64; Lashingtongue; Ashrayne; Outlaw mutiny; Butterflygirl40; CM; Larry; Jackee-Line; Thumper; Sue; Michelle; Jen; Haunted Scorp; Dream Poetess; Den; Frank Cube; Benny14; Annelise; Butch; deadhead poet(Laura); Ladymoon; Faust; Vampirequeen; Violet; Merry; Marisa; MGAKelazzo90; NoSaint; lost relic and Ozchick
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YPDC Club House
Contributed by
spike
on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:36:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Welcome to YPDC
your poetic community
where everybody sleeps past noon
but rise to gaze at mother moon
and party under the emystars
whose reflections draw Oohs and Ahhs….
Tattooed girls get my heart thump’n
and merry chicks get this joint jumpin
as Mexican mammas tap their toes
to the chorus of ‘The Broken Rose’
while Cajun sweeties, eyes aglow
hope that there are vibes to go
Off the dance floor, romanticists
tell wild tales none can resist
femme fatales and vampire queens
ensconced in vivid Gothyk scenes
make Faustian pacts where poems are sold
before the author’s dark and cold
and caged souls share a metal hell
with tongues that lash but cannot spel (sic)
party crashers from afar
sail in from the nearest star
'to come in peace and bring much bliss'
from their planet, Xynobis
bearing lost relics as a gift
and offer MGAKelazzo90 a lift
Quarrels and cross-talk in the kitchen
Flio and Rachel won’t stop mix’n
as misfits and hippy chicks
speak their minds and take their licks
while Annelise, sweet Annelise
discusses war but hopes for peace
Gwen and Louisa drink alone
Colin Baker’s on the phone
sagacious Lionel, Jen, 54
quietly leave through the back door
Kayla, no saint, parties nude
but Frank’s so square he’s now a cube!
Archie, such a reprobate
hits on girls he used to date
while Benny -14 if a day
chases young Violet away
Beyond sunflowers and tea
here comes the dawn machinery
revealing what the poetess saw
nature red in tooth and claw
scorpions with haunted eyes
watch another great sunrise
while baron hawks deftly circle
the morning doves, ever so gentle
as wachumiri’s still their breath
to escape the raven’s death
and butterflies flap their wings
as the Kyarn warning bell
BRRIINGGS!!!
Some suicidal imbecile
threw a match in the woodpile
party’s over, Marisa’s sure
leads a Jackee-Line to the door
Rhymingron lays down a beat
while deadheads shrink from the heat
‘the roof, the roof, the roof is on fire!’
as wild flames and ash climb higher
GET YOUR PEANUTS AND CANDY SEARS!!
as memories are reduced to tears
Alas, the outlaw club is gone
farewell to our happy home
but as you leave, just remember
you can always be a ‘former member’
with artistic convictions unshakeable
and dreams, unbreakable
(Maestar - it’s alive!)
With thanks for taking the time to read and comment, to: Xynobis, Archie, Gothyk, Snemmers, Roxie, emystar, Louisa Montagn; Avarice Riot; Andrew; Rhymingron; Morning Dove; Dreamweaver; Sagacious; reflections; weeping dolphin; Lionel; xtcslilangel; Johnny P; Tena; NY Chick; Ladyfawn; wolfareen; wild-flame; Suicidal-Imbecile; Mexicomamma33; ravens_death;kyarn; cowboy poet; gwenevere; Punka Rach; priss; Jenni K; Sunflowersandtea; Carolina Blue; Beni; Unbreakable; David; levy metal; Vibes2go; Colin; Femme-Fatale; littlebit74;Cajun sweetie; Phil; Thebroknrose; lovestruckhippie; coni; gurl11; Maestar; reprobate; Romanticist; brew; Flio; Fielding88; DarkandCold; jigsma; Caged Soul; candy sears; Schmokin; Mr Peanut 64; Lashingtongue; Ashrayne; Outlaw mutiny; Butterflygirl40; CM; Larry; Jackee-Line; Thumper; Sue; Michelle; Jen; Haunted Scorp; Dream Poetess; Den; Frank Cube; Benny14; Annelise; Butch; deadhead poet(Laura); Ladymoon; Faust; Vampirequeen; Violet; Merry; Marisa; MGAKelazzo90; NoSaint; lost relic and Ozchick
Copyright ©
spike
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2007-01-25 22:36:24]
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:09:36 PM AEST
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I really dug this...not only for the rhyme & flow,( which in my esteem, 'rock' ) but for the great relatables held therein. These people have come to mean a great deal to me...making my 1st internet exprience such a worthy & enriching one. 10 star from me!!!Great job in making sure none go unsung!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:36:46 PM AEST
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*grins*
Now there's a menagerie for sure. You've just about captured the chaos of these environs. Nicely done.
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:51:23 PM AEST
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Ahhhh man, this is way too cool. What a splendid write. We are a bunch of lovable misfits around here aren't we. Damn I love it here. Your poem just rocked the house, my friend. What an awesome write.
*hugs ya tightly*
Peace, Laura |
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 10:29:56 AM AEST
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wow this is another awesome write.. you are very creative in putting the names of the people on the site into poetry.. not many can do something like that .. awesome job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 06:56:52 AM AEST
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S ~
I agree that you have certainly captured the chaos of YPDC .. and the forums. lol
This must have been quite the undertaking .. (where do you find the time? lol)
The piece itself was exceptionally emotive enough to put a smile on this girl's face
but the credits at the end .. well, dearest poet, your heart is showing. *wink*
So, I shamelessly take this moment to thank YOU. You have touched a soul with your
kindness and thoughtfulness, (more than once).
Excellent write .. as always ~
~Breezy
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 09:45:20 PM AEST
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Hurrah! I'm a duck!!! (*giggles*)
: )
My dear Spikito, it has been my pleasure to read your work and you ought know I'll keep coming back again. And... what a treat it was to find myself here among the others for simply doing something that I enjoy. I am one lucky duck. The others are right, of course - we're all mad, really... a bunch of loons, we... and your piece captures the spirit of this place quite well. Ah, you gotta love the charisma, the tom foolery, the talent and the comraderie that exists here (in this place and on this page)!! And... if I do say so myself... we look pretty darn good set upon the page by your hand - loopy, but good... as would seem appropriate. : )
(Oh how I smiled when I perused this!!! I'm certain I must have looked like a cheshire cat, methinks!!!)
Still smiling,
~Snemita |
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by venkat on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:33:59 AM AEST
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Once I was a proud duck..
venkat |
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by venkat on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:34:04 AM AEST
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Once I was a proud duck..
venkat |
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 02:32:50 AM AEST
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Spike~ My you have certainly brightened up my evening my dear friend. You have summed it all up about the YPDC poets. There are misfits, there are loons, the chaos, the forums and so much more here @ YPDC~ ya gotta love it here & all those wonderful poets too, lol.
I am a fan of your work and you are one very talented & gifted writer. I am yet still to finish off reading the rest of your brilliant work. I shall always make sure I stop by your pages for your work is sensational and well worth the read every time. Thank you for sharing your remarkable poetry with us. It's always a pleasure dearest poet friend~
*big poetic hugs n smiles* from ur fan,
Sue M |
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 11:37:44 AM AEST
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wow...... it feels so great to be home again ! this is fabulous! i love how you wove it all together, spike, bless you for being you
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: YPDC Club House
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 01:32:52 AM AEST
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jigsma died on Aug 25, 2006 :-(
http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Forums&file=viewtopic&t=5594&sid=950b182711573c0228c4da6ec547ca7a |
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