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Array ( [sid] => 130989 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Two Years [time] => 2007-01-25 09:45:33 [hometext] => Yes... I know i will survive, but i never thought i could hurt so much. [bodytext] => Its been two years.
Two years since we fell for each other.

Yesterday you told me you wanted to be set free.
You told me that you wanted to live,
to live your teenage years running wild.
You told me that you loved me, but not enough.

So I'll go away,
and run from you.
I'll distance myself.
I'll leave my heart at your doorstep,
since it belongs to you anyway...

I'm dead inside.
I've never felt this empty before.
You've drew the life of me
into space.

Two years...
How can I live now? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MysticFairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Two Years

Contributed by MysticFairy on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 09:45:33 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Its been two years.
Two years since we fell for each other.

Yesterday you told me you wanted to be set free.
You told me that you wanted to live,
to live your teenage years running wild.
You told me that you loved me, but not enough.

So I'll go away,
and run from you.
I'll distance myself.
I'll leave my heart at your doorstep,
since it belongs to you anyway...

I'm dead inside.
I've never felt this empty before.
You've drew the life of me
into space.

Two years...
How can I live now?




Copyright © MysticFairy ... [ 2007-01-25 09:45:33]
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Re: Two Years (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:02:00 AM AEST
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aww this is such a poweful and emotinal write.. great stanza usage.. as for the hurt.. it is painful when you have someone leave you that you love or think you love but remember that everything happens for a reason and you will heal and will find love again.. just give it time and let yourself heal.. I really hope things get better for you soon.. take care

vampyress Jenni


Re: Two Years (User Rating: 1 )
by UrMyInspiration on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:11:48 AM AEST
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Beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing.


Re: Two Years (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:44:27 AM AEST
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Full of pain but .... I was with someone two years and in love.... he was unfaithful ... just the once( to my knowledge) .... she phoned me and told me ....

Here I am 10 months into another realtionship and so in love .....

to think I could have ended up married to the wrong man! ....

You will heal and another will win your heart HIS GREAT LOSS not yours
bless you be happy
Dee x


Re: Two Years (User Rating: 1 )
by Epic on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:47:22 AM AEST
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I know how it is man. Be strong and keep in there. You have a life time ahead of you.


Re: Two Years (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 03:39:42 PM AEST
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It a shame that life has to be this way, but pain is one our most diligent teachers, though for the moment it does not seem that way, but we all know that this to will pass...nice write...




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