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many years of weather,
fighting Winter, July boils,
and the rain"
Comfort on the old back-steps
twisted some, but sturdy.

Dark clouds move across
lighter shades,
or is it the world moving around
charcoal splashes.
Rain..doesn`t it seem searing at times.

I fought the day to bring me here,
the cold minutes spent alone...
no one to watch the rain"...Vincent

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Cold Minutes

Contributed by crow on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 09:58:24 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The wood has grayed
many years of weather,
fighting Winter, July boils,
and the rain"
Comfort on the old back-steps
twisted some, but sturdy.

Dark clouds move across
lighter shades,
or is it the world moving around
charcoal splashes.
Rain..doesn`t it seem searing at times.

I fought the day to bring me here,
the cold minutes spent alone...
no one to watch the rain"...Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2007-01-24 09:58:24]
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Re: Cold Minutes (User Rating: 1 )
by DrowningHeart on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 10:08:37 AM AEST
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Such a simple pleasure and no one to share it with, quite sad. This is very much how I feel as well.

Blessed be
D

Re: Cold Minutes (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 10:16:45 AM AEST
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wow a very powerful yet moving write.. awesome job

vampyress JENNI

Re: Cold Minutes (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 04:34:06 PM AEST
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Sadness evokes the heart of your reader as they read this my friend. Rain it brings me such a peaceful feeling within myself, but it's so sad when you have nobody to share such moments with. A moving piece captured with your mighty pen~ Well done.
hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: Cold Minutes (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 04:42:10 PM AEST
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Love, love, love this write, Vincent. Especially that first stanza,

"comfort on the old back-steps
twisted some, but sturdy"

reminds me of this beautiful old farm house I live in. Your writes are so damn down to earth. You have quickly jumped on my list of favorite YPDC poets. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura

Re: Cold Minutes (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 05:15:20 PM AEST
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Your off to a good start, you have your own style. a plus to any art form. Well crafted nice presentation along with a relatable content .

Thanks also for the comment.

myheartsvoice

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