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Array ( [sid] => 130927 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wishful Thinking [time] => 2007-01-24 00:06:26 [hometext] => I wrote this poem the summer of 2006...I just titled it today. I always dream of fairy tale love...but while writing it, I came to the conclusion that I need to be happy without it, before I can expect to be happy with it. [bodytext] => Does happiness require completeness / a knowledge of the wholeness of identity / your wants, your desires… / no necessity necessary / for it is but a journey with limitless breaks / achieved by few, traveled by many / will thee know me? Will thee know me well? / too many times I have laid hands upon myself; searching through faux joy / my identity irrelevant, for happiness is not repetitive / though a beating heart would serve thee / o, how the beating heart would learn me contentness / embraced by him…can a silent mission serve its purpose? / with blind dreams born of a whisper of desire / the image blank, yet the feelings surreal / thankful am I that the journey yields sensation / for I know nothing of you / though, with eyes closed, you know all of me / my identity lies in that beating heart / escaping through vague curiosity, consuming thoughts, then petty longing / you sought skin to heart and learned my story / content am I now, riding your wave of exploration / though no satisfaction in a journey unfulfilled / necessity will continue limitless breaks / but a silent mission permits suitable pleasure in the irrelevance of incompleteness / my happiness will come in an anonymous package…… [comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 2 [informant] => niccipooh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Wishful Thinking

Contributed by niccipooh on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 12:06:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Does happiness require completeness / a knowledge of the wholeness of identity / your wants, your desires… / no necessity necessary / for it is but a journey with limitless breaks / achieved by few, traveled by many / will thee know me? Will thee know me well? / too many times I have laid hands upon myself; searching through faux joy / my identity irrelevant, for happiness is not repetitive / though a beating heart would serve thee / o, how the beating heart would learn me contentness / embraced by him…can a silent mission serve its purpose? / with blind dreams born of a whisper of desire / the image blank, yet the feelings surreal / thankful am I that the journey yields sensation / for I know nothing of you / though, with eyes closed, you know all of me / my identity lies in that beating heart / escaping through vague curiosity, consuming thoughts, then petty longing / you sought skin to heart and learned my story / content am I now, riding your wave of exploration / though no satisfaction in a journey unfulfilled / necessity will continue limitless breaks / but a silent mission permits suitable pleasure in the irrelevance of incompleteness / my happiness will come in an anonymous package……




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Re: Wishful Thinking (User Rating: 1 )
by Devils-confused-daugther on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 06:35:43 AM AEST
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heya.. i like how at the start it, in a way rhyms *cant spell argh!* and it's gd.... i like it :P gd luck on future writes.
l8ters DCD




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