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And willingly I let you,
Because I felt like you already owned a piece,
Stashed away in a drawer somewhere,
Put away for later,
But in the dark, it’s grown like a fungus.

You stole a bit of my soul tonight,
As we oscillated like two parts of some gigantic, organic machine,
An oxymoron in itself,
Two separate entities that together form
A being more whole than any other,
Intertwined,
Breathing each other in,
In the smoulderingly warm dark.

And just for a second it felt like you’d given me the key to your box, and I’d stepped inside,
And for a beautiful moment,
We couldn’t tell which parts were you
And which were me.

You stole a bit of my soul tonight,
And willingly I let you,
Because now I have a piece of you,
Which I’ll keep close to my heart from this day on.

You right every wrong for me.
I am immersed in you.
You absorb me totally.
All in the time it takes a tear to fall,
An eye to dry,
A smile to form.
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You stole a bit of my soul tonight

Contributed by EndEformEtrancE on Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You stole a bit of my soul tonight,
And willingly I let you,
Because I felt like you already owned a piece,
Stashed away in a drawer somewhere,
Put away for later,
But in the dark, it’s grown like a fungus.

You stole a bit of my soul tonight,
As we oscillated like two parts of some gigantic, organic machine,
An oxymoron in itself,
Two separate entities that together form
A being more whole than any other,
Intertwined,
Breathing each other in,
In the smoulderingly warm dark.

And just for a second it felt like you’d given me the key to your box, and I’d stepped inside,
And for a beautiful moment,
We couldn’t tell which parts were you
And which were me.

You stole a bit of my soul tonight,
And willingly I let you,
Because now I have a piece of you,
Which I’ll keep close to my heart from this day on.

You right every wrong for me.
I am immersed in you.
You absorb me totally.
All in the time it takes a tear to fall,
An eye to dry,
A smile to form.




Copyright © EndEformEtrancE ... [ 2003-02-21 10:00:00]
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Re: You stole a bit of my soul tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 10:16:40 AM AEST
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Great write, very powerful thanks


Re: You stole a bit of my soul tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 10:39:19 PM AEST
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yeah.."I am immersed in you. You absorb me totally." so easy for someone to steal part of your soul, when one finds themselves in this state...nice write
rosie


Re: You stole a bit of my soul tonight (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 08:37:56 AM AEST
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Hey man, u know i'm not much good at judging poetry and the ideals it should represent....
but i have to say that i was well impressed my man, more are needed!!!!!!


Re: You stole a bit of my soul tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 09:35:07 AM AEST
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beautiful, emotional, natural, you capture the feeling so well - great write as always :) keep them coming xxx KT


Re: You stole a bit of my soul tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by razorbladerose on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 09:12:52 AM AEST
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"And for a beautiful moment,
We couldn’t tell which parts were you
And which were me." Took me breath away there! I love this write! So beatiful and heart felt


Re: You stole a bit of my soul tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 11:12:49 AM AEST
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wow....I am speechless....you took my breath away with those beautiful words and the perfect harmony in which they were placed....it's like you actually found the words to express the pains and sorrows and pleasures of love, keep writing.


peace
love
freedom

jen
aka
jacquelynne marilynne


Re: You stole a bit of my soul tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 03:39:15 PM AEST
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Quite an impressive write. Good work here. Thanks!
Saira




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