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Array ( [sid] => 130828 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost within [time] => 2007-01-21 21:11:18 [hometext] => just somethin i wrote [bodytext] => To be free
you are not able
deep in your mind
is where you are lost

you won't find your way
your emotions aren't stable
to take the risk
to pay the cost

This mind you have
is like a maze
constantly you run
into dead ends

this time this place
has left a daze
you can't find your way
where the mind bends

finding a way
for your head to be free
is the hardest task
so far

now it's time
to pay the fee
this deadly place
will leave a scar

within your heart
lies a hole
the very one
you've caused

you know you're lost
you're hurting your soul
time stands still
time has paused.

it's time to face
the very known fact
you're lost
and there's no way out

this frightening world
IS no act
tis within your mind
you walk about.

where you go
is up to you
and you're mind
is wandering still

this is no myth
everything is true
pain and suffering
is all you'll feel

since you've been lost
everything seems so clear
you'll never get out
you're condemned to stay

you understand now
understand every tear
you're condemned
but you want to stray

shall you choose
to continue to wander
searching for an exit
that doesn't exist

you will try
and you will plunder
the truth is what
you'll want to resist

you're

lost

within
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 13 [informant] => auura [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Lost within

Contributed by auura on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:11:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



To be free
you are not able
deep in your mind
is where you are lost

you won't find your way
your emotions aren't stable
to take the risk
to pay the cost

This mind you have
is like a maze
constantly you run
into dead ends

this time this place
has left a daze
you can't find your way
where the mind bends

finding a way
for your head to be free
is the hardest task
so far

now it's time
to pay the fee
this deadly place
will leave a scar

within your heart
lies a hole
the very one
you've caused

you know you're lost
you're hurting your soul
time stands still
time has paused.

it's time to face
the very known fact
you're lost
and there's no way out

this frightening world
IS no act
tis within your mind
you walk about.

where you go
is up to you
and you're mind
is wandering still

this is no myth
everything is true
pain and suffering
is all you'll feel

since you've been lost
everything seems so clear
you'll never get out
you're condemned to stay

you understand now
understand every tear
you're condemned
but you want to stray

shall you choose
to continue to wander
searching for an exit
that doesn't exist

you will try
and you will plunder
the truth is what
you'll want to resist

you're

lost

within




Copyright © auura ... [ 2007-01-21 21:11:18]
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Re: Lost within (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 10:37:57 AM AEST
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Yes dark write, yet we DO get lost within, and in so many other ways....and it hurts.! Sorry your pain is there......maybe writing about it will help. Keep posting


Brew~


Re: Lost within (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 02:58:06 PM AEST
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A very Knowledgable and dark write,
Expressive to the hearts core.

Well done..


Re: Lost within (User Rating: 1 )
by Alex23 on Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 08:09:25 PM AEST
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Wow, there is just so much dark emotion in this write that...I feel it! It can hurt to be lost, and that is why must always rely on each other. Good write.




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