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I know now why I was always there,
And why you gave me a home to place my wandering care,
To watch your ever changing face,
And see you grow with human grace,

And human is all that you can ever be,
From some far star you came to me,
Handing over purpose, in innocent disguise,
Possesing no meaning just perfect surprise,

Life spawned from living life,
Lit your eyes and gave you sight,
Leaving humans dark embrace,
And from the womb emerged your face,

Challenging the life, deep within me,
with nothing but light, so pure and so free,
Life's miasma slowly cleared,
The future...crystal clear

You were everything i used to fear,

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A Mother's Revalations

Contributed by zenith66 on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 08:31:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A Mothers' Revalations

I know now why I was always there,
And why you gave me a home to place my wandering care,
To watch your ever changing face,
And see you grow with human grace,

And human is all that you can ever be,
From some far star you came to me,
Handing over purpose, in innocent disguise,
Possesing no meaning just perfect surprise,

Life spawned from living life,
Lit your eyes and gave you sight,
Leaving humans dark embrace,
And from the womb emerged your face,

Challenging the life, deep within me,
with nothing but light, so pure and so free,
Life's miasma slowly cleared,
The future...crystal clear

You were everything i used to fear,

Zenith66

Copyright © zenith66 ... [ 2007-01-21 20:31:50]
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Re: A Mother's Revalations (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 08:39:55 PM AEST
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wow very well written and expressed for a first write.. i take it this is about fearing becoming a mother and then embracing it at the end.. its like a story that unfolds.. awesome job

vampyress jenni

Re: A Mother's Revalations (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 08:49:10 PM AEST
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good topic
well done.

Re: A Mother's Revalations (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:31:58 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, zenith66!

Terrific first post. As a mom myself, I recall the fear leading up to the birth of my daughter and know well the challenge of which you speak. Ah... but, yes... there are such precious moments born of the same!

This, in my opinion, is an easy read but I wouldn't refer to it as a "light" one (least, not for me). I particularly appreciate your offering near rhyme following "life" in lieu of the more common (overused, to my way of thinking) "strife". Your 'sight' was a much appreciated alternative.

Again, welcome!

~Snemmy

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