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Array ( [sid] => 130782 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Would. [time] => 2007-01-20 19:47:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've got this faith to blind me
And I've got these dreams we share
I have this smile to hide me
And I have this cross to bear
I see our stars tonight
you bring that light
All those times we laughed
The scars that you left
yet I miss you most of all
Are you somewhere
Without a care
Or are you as alone as I
Did you ever make it home
Never thought I'd be this way
Hung on every word you say
Deep inside of you
Down inside of you
is me
thriving on the air you give
you...
and only you..
your the reason why i live
give all that i can give
All I wanted
Was all I needed to know
You take it all away...
You take it slow..
And so I turn to you my love
for the solace that is there
lay me down in sheets where she lies
i know she's grinning in there
crossed my heart and hoped to die
and still you broke that spirit that i bear
but still...
It's all I want
It's all I needed now it's through
It all comes back to you
The only one
There's nothing left for me to do
So I sing this song for you
And I hope that what is true
Will find a way to you
I sing this song for you
Cuz Venus never showed the way
The stars would not be sold
Heaven stole the light of day
And i stole it back and gave it to you
Hideaway, take me now
I cannot face another round
And I'm flipping through the pages
For my name to take it's place
cant you see its killing me
all i ever wanted was you...
you, you...
no one else will ever do...
in your heart u know its true
no matter what you do
you, you...
you taught me the architects of pride
u give me butterflies
teary eyes
make me mutter and stutter
but it feels so good
no...no...
no you dont understand
i'd put a ring on your finger
and marry you right now if i could...
yes i would...

yes...
i...
would. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
I Would.

Contributed by Bleedthelove on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 07:47:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I've got this faith to blind me
And I've got these dreams we share
I have this smile to hide me
And I have this cross to bear
I see our stars tonight
you bring that light
All those times we laughed
The scars that you left
yet I miss you most of all
Are you somewhere
Without a care
Or are you as alone as I
Did you ever make it home
Never thought I'd be this way
Hung on every word you say
Deep inside of you
Down inside of you
is me
thriving on the air you give
you...
and only you..
your the reason why i live
give all that i can give
All I wanted
Was all I needed to know
You take it all away...
You take it slow..
And so I turn to you my love
for the solace that is there
lay me down in sheets where she lies
i know she's grinning in there
crossed my heart and hoped to die
and still you broke that spirit that i bear
but still...
It's all I want
It's all I needed now it's through
It all comes back to you
The only one
There's nothing left for me to do
So I sing this song for you
And I hope that what is true
Will find a way to you
I sing this song for you
Cuz Venus never showed the way
The stars would not be sold
Heaven stole the light of day
And i stole it back and gave it to you
Hideaway, take me now
I cannot face another round
And I'm flipping through the pages
For my name to take it's place
cant you see its killing me
all i ever wanted was you...
you, you...
no one else will ever do...
in your heart u know its true
no matter what you do
you, you...
you taught me the architects of pride
u give me butterflies
teary eyes
make me mutter and stutter
but it feels so good
no...no...
no you dont understand
i'd put a ring on your finger
and marry you right now if i could...
yes i would...

yes...
i...
would.




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Re: I Would. (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:24:13 PM AEST
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A very touching poem. I was moved by your writing.

Keep it up.

Butch Corpuz


Re: I Would. (User Rating: 1 )
by SaintzAndSinnerz on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:17:47 PM AEST
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You write the most beautiful poetry.


Re: I Would. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 08:43:37 PM AEST
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wow beautifully devoted and expressive.. very well worded.. and nice flow.. this would be an awesome love song

vampyress Jenni


Re: I Would. (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 10:19:41 PM AEST
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outstanding InnerVision




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