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Array ( [sid] => 130771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Painter Man [time] => 2007-01-20 14:35:47 [hometext] => My husband paints electric poles and towers. It is some life. This piece is about a guy he works with, who just can't seem to be able to retire. [bodytext] =>



Look at the painter man's
tan and weathered face.
{No disgrace}
Lines to match all
the roads he's traveled.
Lines so easy to trace.

He started painting
the steel at such
a young age;
instilled the life
of freedom deep
within his veins.
{he's not ashamed}

He's lost so much
with the life
that was once home.
Out on the road lonely
ahhhh but never alone.

He's found family
afar,
traveling brothers
{some...drinking partners}
all living this dream
of freedom
on the high steel.
Thrill seeker touching sky
I cannot imagine how it must feel.

How many times brother
have you said you'd retire
{liar}
You can't stop
it's part of what you do.
Reaching for the top.
It defines you
Free
Weathered
Head in the clouds

Painter Man
it's the life you command.







Dedicated to Paul, who every Winter says "I'm done" and every Spring........ he's on the road again.


Laura Horner
2006 [comments] => 8 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 23 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
Painter Man

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 02:35:47 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems







Look at the painter man's
tan and weathered face.
{No disgrace}
Lines to match all
the roads he's traveled.
Lines so easy to trace.

He started painting
the steel at such
a young age;
instilled the life
of freedom deep
within his veins.
{he's not ashamed}

He's lost so much
with the life
that was once home.
Out on the road lonely
ahhhh but never alone.

He's found family
afar,
traveling brothers
{some...drinking partners}
all living this dream
of freedom
on the high steel.
Thrill seeker touching sky
I cannot imagine how it must feel.

How many times brother
have you said you'd retire
{liar}
You can't stop
it's part of what you do.
Reaching for the top.
It defines you
Free
Weathered
Head in the clouds

Painter Man
it's the life you command.







Dedicated to Paul, who every Winter says "I'm done" and every Spring........ he's on the road again.


Laura Horner
2006




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Re: Painter Man (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 02:47:07 PM AEST
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Wow Laura this is excellent...
Maybe if he gets a ticket to Reykjavik, Iceland or the Arctic this way spring won't roll around so quick.

Well Done

Peace
AJ


Re: Painter Man (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 03:28:06 PM AEST
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Yes I can relate to this. I know a man who says this every month or so. He is edging on 75 now, and still not slowing down. Nice dedication to a hard and maybe stubborn, not in a nasty sense worker. Loved it. Sue x


Re: Painter Man (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 04:12:24 PM AEST
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I came here today w/ a lil' residue negativity from life in general & I really needed a feel good pick me up...thank you, as I couldn't of asked for more than this...you have such a talent for the translating of your observations to warm expression!

You give good vibe sister
~KerryLynne


Re: Painter Man (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:27:44 PM AEST
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sis I could see Paul so clearly with the picture you cast upon this page. Loved it sis.

Michelle


Re: Painter Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:38:50 PM AEST
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Excellent dedication poem, Laura. I never thought that those things needed painting till your poems educated me. It just goes to show that characters follow the lifestyle, whether it's a carnival, a ship or power poles!

S


Re: Painter Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 04:17:34 PM AEST
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A heartfelt write that touches the heart~
You my friend always leave me inspired after I visit your pages. You have a big beautiful heart of gold and may no one or anything ever change that~
A heartfelt dediaction beautifully penned. A toast to Paul and his fellow pole painters~
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m


Re: Painter Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:56:47 PM AEST
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this is excellent! I agree with ths write, don`t think I could ever stop and just watch..Crow


Re: Painter Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 04:23:57 AM AEST
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Work sometimes get in your blood and you can't quit. You mean it when you say:" I've had it and this is the end." Come time to start again and there you go. Back into the line.
Ramfire




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