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Feeling the sound of your heart touching my soul with caressing whispers
Hearing your unbearable beauty resounding in my head
Tasting the sweat of desire condensing on my mind
Smelling the weightlessness of your hair draining all of my thoughts
Seeing those sweet sugar coated lips glistening with liquid longing

As I advance

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You Turn My Senses

Contributed by JoeyTrib1550 on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:53:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Advancing to kiss...

Feeling the sound of your heart touching my soul with caressing whispers
Hearing your unbearable beauty resounding in my head
Tasting the sweat of desire condensing on my mind
Smelling the weightlessness of your hair draining all of my thoughts
Seeing those sweet sugar coated lips glistening with liquid longing

As I advance

to kiss...

Copyright © JoeyTrib1550 ... [ 2007-01-20 10:53:32]
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Re: You Turn My Senses (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 12:00:11 PM AEST
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wha...really very romantic.
GOOD.
FRANCO

Re: You Turn My Senses (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 12:20:40 PM AEST
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Saw the title and it automatically made me think of the song by John Denver (yeah, Im 42 and grew up listening to some John Denver) LOL His song was titled "Annie's Song" and I must share a couple of lines

"you fill up my senses like an night in a forest ..like a mountain in springtime...like a walk in the rain"

anywho beautiful lyrics and your write was beautiful as well. Very tender and intimate touching upon each of your "senses". Thanks for reminding me of the old song and for sharing this terrific love poem.

Peace, Laura

Re: You Turn My Senses (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 01:27:02 PM AEST
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wow, breathtaking, as surely the moment was also.

Re: You Turn My Senses (User Rating: 1 )
by amateurwriter on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:06:26 PM AEST
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My god!! I must confess I blushed, for this lines reminded me of some intense moments!!
It is really beautiful. Great read!

Re: You Turn My Senses (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 01:09:51 PM AEST
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Aww. Beautiful. Really good job.

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