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Sitting there waiting by the phone
But as she waits, only her hopes fall
As she waits for him to call

Look at her standing there by herself
Letting go of everything she's felt
Waiting to fit into the crowd
Maybe then her mother would be proud

This girl has no one left to live for
She doesn't even want to live anymore
She has so much she wants to be
This girl I know as me
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The girl I know as me

Contributed by undiscoveredshadow on Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 12:20:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Look at her sitting there all alone
Sitting there waiting by the phone
But as she waits, only her hopes fall
As she waits for him to call

Look at her standing there by herself
Letting go of everything she's felt
Waiting to fit into the crowd
Maybe then her mother would be proud

This girl has no one left to live for
She doesn't even want to live anymore
She has so much she wants to be
This girl I know as me

Copyright © undiscoveredshadow ... [ 2007-01-19 12:20:36]
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Re: The girl I know as me (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 12:46:30 PM AEST
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I can relate to this.. Actually it reminds me of myself from about 2 years ago maybe... This was good and I thought you did a good job expressing yourself..

Take care
Christina

Re: The girl I know as me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 02:00:54 PM AEST
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Sadness I feel deep in my core reading this.

Emotive write and created nicely.

Hang in there..... there is happiness out there.

~Michelle~

Re: The girl I know as me (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_in_the_darkness09 on Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 03:59:01 PM AEST
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this like...fits my description.....seriously...im sorry...cause i know what it feels....but nice poem...i liked it...

{rA!n}

Re: The girl I know as me (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkangelpoet07 on Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 04:46:09 PM AEST
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Wow, I love this.. This reminds me soo much of me..

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