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Array ( [sid] => 130731 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Promise Me [time] => 2007-01-19 08:51:03 [hometext] => This is directed to my best friend...we both love eachother but can not be together because of the war...i fear ever second i will not see him again and its just truly killing me inside...i just dont know what to do... [bodytext] => I am thinking of you right now
I wish I could see you somehow
Feel your love and warm embrace
Feel you wipe the tears from my face
Hear your voice whispering low
Hold you close and tell you I love you so
Be able to cry without any fear
I know you don’t judge and are always here
I wonder if our eyes will ever meet
I wonder if our hearts will ever again beat
I wonder if I will ever be able to smile
Without you here making life worthwhile
I wonder if I can make it through
I just want to tell you I love you
When the rain falls you’re reflected in my tears
When I am alone your face is in all the mirrors
When the wind blows your voice is all I hear
When the thunder cracks loosing you is all I fear
When I sleep you are on my mind
And when you sleep I hope we are intertwined
I think of you every passing day
It’s killing me that you have to be away
Don’t forget me while you are gone
Without you I just can’t go on
Every second that passes I miss you more
I need you now more then ever before
Just please promise me you will come home
And promise you won’t leave me alone
Just make one last promise to me
That we will always be meant to be
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 61 [informant] => nothingness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Just Promise Me

Contributed by nothingness on Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 08:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I am thinking of you right now
I wish I could see you somehow
Feel your love and warm embrace
Feel you wipe the tears from my face
Hear your voice whispering low
Hold you close and tell you I love you so
Be able to cry without any fear
I know you don’t judge and are always here
I wonder if our eyes will ever meet
I wonder if our hearts will ever again beat
I wonder if I will ever be able to smile
Without you here making life worthwhile
I wonder if I can make it through
I just want to tell you I love you
When the rain falls you’re reflected in my tears
When I am alone your face is in all the mirrors
When the wind blows your voice is all I hear
When the thunder cracks loosing you is all I fear
When I sleep you are on my mind
And when you sleep I hope we are intertwined
I think of you every passing day
It’s killing me that you have to be away
Don’t forget me while you are gone
Without you I just can’t go on
Every second that passes I miss you more
I need you now more then ever before
Just please promise me you will come home
And promise you won’t leave me alone
Just make one last promise to me
That we will always be meant to be




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Re: Just Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 10:25:28 AM AEST
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Very sweet, loving, caring feeling ... and so much insecurity ....
He will be back sooner than you know .. hold on the positives ... that you have found a love .. hes on loan at the moment but soon you will be back in eachothers arms and this will all be over your feelings of emptiness filled with love again and heart felt joy ...

keep up the poems and stay positive xx


Re: Just Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Bishop_008 on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 01:12:07 PM AEST
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Wow. That's awesome. I like it alot. :)

- Ryan


Re: Just Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 02:53:48 PM AEST
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This so heartfelt......beautiful words,




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