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a soft cashmere throw
Grandma’s apple pie on Sunday
the song of a tiny blue jay

You are a hot shower to end the day
an open bottle of cabernet
poetry inside a library book
an afternoon lunch by a brook

You are a road trip in a beat-up ford
singing karaoke to the dashboard
The hope after every heartbreak
finding good in a mistake

You are getting caught in a downpour
splashing in puddles by the door
my favorite song on the radio
the gentle rapping of the crow

You are finding a rule to bend
a secret among trusted friends
the awkwardness of a first date
showing up fashionably late

You are seeing a favorite band
the dripping ice cream on my hand
having a really good dream
rewatching a beloved movie scene

You are in every mundane gem
… so easy to overlook them
My happiness proclaimed
and I don’t even know your name

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Waiting For You

Contributed by Helena on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:36:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You are the sunlight on my morning pillow
a soft cashmere throw
Grandma’s apple pie on Sunday
the song of a tiny blue jay

You are a hot shower to end the day
an open bottle of cabernet
poetry inside a library book
an afternoon lunch by a brook

You are a road trip in a beat-up ford
singing karaoke to the dashboard
The hope after every heartbreak
finding good in a mistake

You are getting caught in a downpour
splashing in puddles by the door
my favorite song on the radio
the gentle rapping of the crow

You are finding a rule to bend
a secret among trusted friends
the awkwardness of a first date
showing up fashionably late

You are seeing a favorite band
the dripping ice cream on my hand
having a really good dream
rewatching a beloved movie scene

You are in every mundane gem
… so easy to overlook them
My happiness proclaimed
and I don’t even know your name

Copyright Â© Helena ... [ 2007-01-18 14:36:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Waiting For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 03:03:34 PM AEST
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Aw, i really liked this. I believe you did an awesome job on this. And the ending was really cute. I LOVED IT! I am still waiting for my prince charming also. And I hope he'll be just like this poem explains. Wonderful job!

Re: Waiting For You (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 03:24:56 PM AEST
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A good soulful piece that catches the hearts attention and shares the longing.
"...Call me but love, and I'll be new baptized; Henceforth I never will be Romeo..."

Well Done

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: Waiting For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 06:53:49 PM AEST
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very well written, keep it up

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