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It will last hundreds of years
It may turn to rock and last a hundred thousand years
Stars are definately more real than you
They last millions of years
Some turn to black holes
Where not even light can escape the intense gravity
As for me, if I last a century
Its still only a blink of the eye
Barely enough time for a drink
When the body's gone
What will I turn into? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 21 [informant] => trueecho [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

More Real Than You

Contributed by trueecho on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:58:42 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

This table in front of you is more real than you are
It will last hundreds of years
It may turn to rock and last a hundred thousand years
Stars are definately more real than you
They last millions of years
Some turn to black holes
Where not even light can escape the intense gravity
As for me, if I last a century
Its still only a blink of the eye
Barely enough time for a drink
When the body's gone
What will I turn into?

Copyright © trueecho ... [ 2007-01-18 11:58:42]
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Re: More Real Than You (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:30:11 PM AEST
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We are but mortal beings,
a mere speck of dust compared
to the immense colossal of time.
Excellent write!

Re: More Real Than You (User Rating: 1 )
by cnstallion on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:31:40 PM AEST
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1st coal, and if you are not mined out of the ground like the rest of us by future peoples, you will turn into oil....and trust me... we will pump you out because we need to get around in our lives and wonder exactly what you just asked..... :-)... good write..liked it..

Re: More Real Than You (User Rating: 1 )
by darcy5450 on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 08:29:21 AM AEST
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Makes you think and brings up good conversation points.

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