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Everyone in my eyes is distorted
aborting love
filling up with hate
as you drown in a thoughtless drunken state

the black clouds raise up and it rains of mistakes
bleeding out of your mouth the rage flows within and surfaces out
grasping onto anyone standing in the way

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confused and distorted

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Confused and contorted
Everyone in my eyes is distorted
aborting love
filling up with hate
as you drown in a thoughtless drunken state

the black clouds raise up and it rains of mistakes
bleeding out of your mouth the rage flows within and surfaces out
grasping onto anyone standing in the way

Vampyress jenni

Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2007-01-17 15:33:56]
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Re: confused and distorted (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 04:56:42 PM AEST
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This is a sad and desperate write. I feel the pain and hurt in your words. You express all your emotions here. Sue x

Re: confused and distorted (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 09:13:39 PM AEST
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Blessed Be, a years gone by and you can hold this at arms length and take a really good look...
tight, sad, scared, dark, twisted, misanthropic, self-defeating perhaps all en route to a deeper understanding about being alive...

Thank You for Posting

Peace
Yang

Re: confused and distorted (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:38:54 PM AEST
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Another beautifully written
poem. You express your
emotions very eloquently.

Re: confused and distorted (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:19:01 PM AEST
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This is very nice, quite a bit of wisdom going on here. Time may heal but it can also cloud one's perspective. I like your style of presentation btw.

myhearts voice

Re: confused and distorted (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 06:01:12 PM AEST
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Jenni~ I'm so glad these are old feelings my dear friend. You have expressed yourself so well in your write. An emotional piece of writing penned so well. A rainbow of happiness to brighten up your down days my friend.
love n hugs,
sue m

Re: confused and distorted (User Rating: 1 )
by seafire on Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 09:40:17 PM AEST
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HMM sounds like you were trying to make decisions in your life . things were making you sad but this is a great piece of work your a great poet i enjoy your poetry keep on writing
emmajean

Re: confused and distorted (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 01:48:35 PM AEST
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simply brilliant, an insight to thought, its dark tone and honesty made me feel for you.

Remember,

It's your life, no regrets,
Dont' look back and want to forget.

........

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