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Array ( [sid] => 130650 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sever The Foundation [time] => 2007-01-17 13:33:13 [hometext] => ...gemini awry... [bodytext] => THIS WORLD OF HEMISPHERES AND OUTSIDE SNEERS HAS GOT TO END
THE INSANITY OF A DUAL MIND HAS CAUSED MINE TO REND
THIS SKIN AIN'T BIG ENOUGH FOR THE BOTH OF US AND I WON'T LEAVE
HAND ME A HACKSAW, A BUTCHER KNIFE 'CAUSE IT'S TIME TO CLEAVE

**** NATURE, IT ****** US: DEFECTIVE
MY OWN MIND, I CAN'T TRUST; INFECTED

I just wanted to be pure
The loss of life was the only cure
CLEANSE THE MUTATION
A chill emits as the two are torn
The skulls divide and I am reborn
SEVER THE FOUNDATION

I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY YOU TRY TO RESIST
THIS SEPERATION, ERADIFICATION IS NEEDED TO DESIST
BIPOLAR THOUGHTS, LAYERED FEELINGS, SCHIZOPHRENIA
OUR CONSCIOUSNESS AT THIS TIME IS PURE DELIRIUM

STOP SCREAMING - I'm working
TO REMOVE YOU - STOP SHRIEKING

I just wanted to be pure
The loss of life was the only cure
CLEANSE THE MUTATION
A chill emits as the two are torn
The skulls divide and I am reborn
SEVER THE FOUNDATION

NEVER SLEEPING
THIS IS ENDING
SEPERATE BEINGS

EYEBALLS ON THE FLOOR AND ALL INSIDES ON DISPLAY
KILLING YOU WAS ENDING ME, I'D DO IT ANYDAY
FOR THIS EUPHORIC SENSE OF SINGULARITY
THIS HOMICIDE WAS SUICIDE, THERE'S ONLY ONE OF ME

CHEST OPEN
EYES CLOSING
DARKNESS
TO FEEL
SO EMPTY
I LOVE THIS

I just wanted to be pure
The loss of life was the only cure
CLEANSE THE MUTATION
A chill emits as the two are torn
The skulls divide and I am reborn
SEVER THE FOUNDATION
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Sever The Foundation

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:33:13 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



THIS WORLD OF HEMISPHERES AND OUTSIDE SNEERS HAS GOT TO END
THE INSANITY OF A DUAL MIND HAS CAUSED MINE TO REND
THIS SKIN AIN'T BIG ENOUGH FOR THE BOTH OF US AND I WON'T LEAVE
HAND ME A HACKSAW, A BUTCHER KNIFE 'CAUSE IT'S TIME TO CLEAVE

**** NATURE, IT ****** US: DEFECTIVE
MY OWN MIND, I CAN'T TRUST; INFECTED

I just wanted to be pure
The loss of life was the only cure
CLEANSE THE MUTATION
A chill emits as the two are torn
The skulls divide and I am reborn
SEVER THE FOUNDATION

I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY YOU TRY TO RESIST
THIS SEPERATION, ERADIFICATION IS NEEDED TO DESIST
BIPOLAR THOUGHTS, LAYERED FEELINGS, SCHIZOPHRENIA
OUR CONSCIOUSNESS AT THIS TIME IS PURE DELIRIUM

STOP SCREAMING - I'm working
TO REMOVE YOU - STOP SHRIEKING

I just wanted to be pure
The loss of life was the only cure
CLEANSE THE MUTATION
A chill emits as the two are torn
The skulls divide and I am reborn
SEVER THE FOUNDATION

NEVER SLEEPING
THIS IS ENDING
SEPERATE BEINGS

EYEBALLS ON THE FLOOR AND ALL INSIDES ON DISPLAY
KILLING YOU WAS ENDING ME, I'D DO IT ANYDAY
FOR THIS EUPHORIC SENSE OF SINGULARITY
THIS HOMICIDE WAS SUICIDE, THERE'S ONLY ONE OF ME

CHEST OPEN
EYES CLOSING
DARKNESS
TO FEEL
SO EMPTY
I LOVE THIS

I just wanted to be pure
The loss of life was the only cure
CLEANSE THE MUTATION
A chill emits as the two are torn
The skulls divide and I am reborn
SEVER THE FOUNDATION




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Re: Sever The Foundation (User Rating: 1 )
by cnstallion on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:19:07 PM AEST
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WOW!!!...lol.....that was morbidly wonderful.. and I get what you are saying man.. but.. the quickest way to purity in the chaos in this world is not to end your life.... I would personally try to just turn off the news and the AM radio band and pick up a relaxing hobby or activity.....Palates maybe?


Re: Sever The Foundation (User Rating: 1 )
by xXdeadXpoetXx on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 08:56:32 AM AEST
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gorgeous. i cannot tell, though, if you are for or against the destruction the world is causing. I read the poem 4 times in a row and it is extremely sharp. please leave me a message with what you're trying to say here. it has left me speechless.


Re: Sever The Foundation (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 06:53:33 AM AEST
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This was an amazing poem. I loved the flow and it was just so amazing how you wrote this. Great poem.

Take care
Christina


Re: Sever The Foundation (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 06:54:42 AM AEST
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This was an amazing poem. I loved the flow and it was just so amazing how you wrote this. Great poem.

Take care
Christina




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