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Array ( [sid] => 130632 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Storm of Sadness [time] => 2007-01-17 02:24:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Death was the thunder,roared
lightning showed me my hell
the wind blew
with my soul’stew
ringing for me the death’s knell.

The devils made love,
blood rained in torrents,
I cried in pain
my body blood-stained
I had sinned,
but nobody knew that,
with a cursed life
I stood in the eye of the storm.

Happiness ,love ,life
was sucked out of me.
Pain ,guilt ,depression
followed in endless.
As it entered my life,
The Storm of Sadness

- Tejas Thakker [comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => tejas9999 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Storm of Sadness

Contributed by tejas9999 on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:24:57 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Death was the thunder,roared
lightning showed me my hell
the wind blew
with my soul’stew
ringing for me the death’s knell.

The devils made love,
blood rained in torrents,
I cried in pain
my body blood-stained
I had sinned,
but nobody knew that,
with a cursed life
I stood in the eye of the storm.

Happiness ,love ,life
was sucked out of me.
Pain ,guilt ,depression
followed in endless.
As it entered my life,
The Storm of Sadness

- Tejas Thakker

Copyright Â© tejas9999 ... [ 2007-01-17 02:24:57]
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Re: The Storm of Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 10:52:06 AM AEST
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A wonderful write:
It is indeed a agonizing and painful experience to carry the guilt of sin in the heart, but there no sin that cannot be cleansed through repentance.
Please take care of yourself
FRANCO

Re: The Storm of Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 07:36:56 PM AEST
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Incredible! I love the storm of thunder compared with the inner storm of self contrast within this write.

There are none of us on this earth free of sin or shortcoming. We all have done things that later on we are not so proud of but it is those times that bring forth lessons and knowledge and a support to our spirit and mind of better things to strive for.

Guilt can be an all consuming thing, something I understand and I feel ya there!

~Michelle~

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