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Broken not once not twice
But so many times it seems
Left with many broken dreams

No longer willing to love share
To open her heart again never dare
One man wanted her heart for his own
His love for her seemed to have grown

Pondering this she took a walk in the snow
To the garden asking for a sign to show
If this were the man the one so true
Who would not leave her soul black and blue

Before her eyes could this be
Right next to a barren tree
Above the snow proud and tall
A bright red rose told it all

To give this man a chance she chose
Because of that radiant red rose
Happy now as his wife
Hopefully for the rest of her life [comments] => 7 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 31 [informant] => NoSaint [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

Rose in the Snow

Contributed by NoSaint on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 10:26:39 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Her heart was cold as ice
Broken not once not twice
But so many times it seems
Left with many broken dreams

No longer willing to love share
To open her heart again never dare
One man wanted her heart for his own
His love for her seemed to have grown

Pondering this she took a walk in the snow
To the garden asking for a sign to show
If this were the man the one so true
Who would not leave her soul black and blue

Before her eyes could this be
Right next to a barren tree
Above the snow proud and tall
A bright red rose told it all

To give this man a chance she chose
Because of that radiant red rose
Happy now as his wife
Hopefully for the rest of her life

Copyright © NoSaint ... [ 2007-01-16 10:26:39]
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Re: Rose in the Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 02:15:29 PM AEST
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Your lyrical piece has me holding these "Roses" for its bouquet. The mythic and heroic elements all complimented by fate. You are a floral poet.

Well Done

Peace
Yang

Re: Rose in the Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 02:37:10 PM AEST
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My mother's name was Rose. It is one of my favorite flowers, truely a beautiful and intense write.
Peace, Laura

Re: Rose in the Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:18:33 PM AEST
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I so love these rose verses, poetic and beautiful with a wisdom within the lines.
Bravo!

Michelle

Re: Rose in the Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:24:20 PM AEST
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Another beautiful write of yours to treasure my dear friend. I absolutely love your rose series. Keep up the great work~
love n hugs,
sue m

Re: Rose in the Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by manforgod on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 07:41:23 PM AEST
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Very nice write. I really enjoyed it, love lost and love found once again.

Re: Rose in the Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:08:25 PM AEST
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May your life continue now to always be a rose in the snow kind of living. This was a touching and sweet write for this new man o' yours. Congratulations and good luck.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: Rose in the Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:13:37 PM AEST
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Someimes we need a sign to guide us when we are completely lost. Your Rose series is very good, I enjoy reading each one. This one is great, I loved it.

mike

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