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When I need you?
Will you hug me
When I want to die?
Will you talk to me
When I can’t talk to you?
Will you call me
When you’re bored?
Will you love me
Right now?

Will you care
When I cut my skin?
Will you stop me
From jumping off this bridge?

I’m standing on the edge
Waiting for you
Waiting for you to save me
Waiting for you to stop me
Waiting for you to see me
Waiting for you to love me.

Where are you?
Why are you so far?
Why can’t you be here?
Why do I want you here?
Why do you matter so much to me?
What have I ever done
To make you think of me?

What have I done?
I am in my own little world
Where you care about me
Where you save me
Where you love me
Where you stop me
Where you don’t leave me

Reality has left me
And now I’m here
On the bridge
Waiting for you
The hero in my head.

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The Hero in my Head

Contributed by sweetkisses0741 on Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 08:30:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Will you be here
When I need you?
Will you hug me
When I want to die?
Will you talk to me
When I can’t talk to you?
Will you call me
When you’re bored?
Will you love me
Right now?

Will you care
When I cut my skin?
Will you stop me
From jumping off this bridge?

I’m standing on the edge
Waiting for you
Waiting for you to save me
Waiting for you to stop me
Waiting for you to see me
Waiting for you to love me.

Where are you?
Why are you so far?
Why can’t you be here?
Why do I want you here?
Why do you matter so much to me?
What have I ever done
To make you think of me?

What have I done?
I am in my own little world
Where you care about me
Where you save me
Where you love me
Where you stop me
Where you don’t leave me

Reality has left me
And now I’m here
On the bridge
Waiting for you
The hero in my head.

Copyright Â© sweetkisses0741 ... [ 2007-01-15 20:30:18]
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Re: The Hero in my Head (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 10:47:09 PM AEST
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amasing write, i can so relate, especially right now... thanks for sharing ;)

Jenni xxoo

Re: The Hero in my Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 10:37:04 AM AEST
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wow... amazing write excellently described words weigh heavy with emotion really well done

Re: The Hero in my Head (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:02:41 PM AEST
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Yes, we all need a hero in our lives. Someone to save us, even if its from ourselves. Good work, the imagery is great.

mike

Re: The Hero in my Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:59:18 AM AEST
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"And now i'm here on the bridge waiting for you...the hero in my head". I love that line. Reminds me so much of someone. Excellent job.

Re: The Hero in my Head (User Rating: 1 )
by VR2776 on Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 10:13:30 AM AEST
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Great write ...I feel the emotion .. Feel the questions and sadly feel the loneliness of being needed and wanted...Been there too often, words like this doesnt just get written they are felt. Good Poem, but There is one who will be there always... He promised to never leave us ... :)

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