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When I Judge You
Contributed by
Unholy_Soldier
on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hate those who hate me,
This is the only way it can be,
Point your finger at me again,
I put the NiNe to your chin,
And pull the trigger till I count Ten.
Do it again,
Please tempt me to give in,
Lets give your perfect world a spin,
Lets see what happends when I judge you,
My vengeance is true,
Do it again,
As the bullet digs its way in,
I can only crack a grin,
Time to move along,
And do it again.
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Unholy_Soldier
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2003-02-20 20:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: When I Judge You
(User Rating: 1 ) by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 09:03:37 PM AEST (User
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i really liked this poem...i dont see why it hasn't recieved more attention, it certainly deserves it. keep up the good work. -david |
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Re: When I Judge You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sheep-says-baa on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 02:02:37 AM AEST (User
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Tad morbid...I also got a tad confused on the subject of the poem. None-the-less I liked it though! |
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Re: When I Judge You
(User Rating: 1 ) by cryingonmyporch on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 12:42:39 AM AEST (User
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cool |
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Re: When I Judge You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Good_King_Bragi on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 11:24:28 AM AEST (User
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Gosh...so much darkness...so much hate...so much fury...so much spite...I'm telling you, you gotta find a way to release it all or you'll destroy yourself. Still, don't stop (the writing). |
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