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Array ( [sid] => 130534 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Determined. [time] => 2007-01-14 23:21:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cry. Cut. Drown.Slut.
Muse come to my assault.
Weakness through you face comes true,
I'm so much stronger, I know, you too.
Love is gone, pure business feeling,
when age comes I will stop the healing,
leave your side for riches will,
find my diamond on the hill.
Tear the bonds of sacred clan,
like the youngest bird of all
I will fly out to the world of damned,
will fly across the broadest brawl,
the coldest winter, hottest rain
information filled in brain.
Common sense, good looks and pride.
Look at that black minded bride
of success, riches,fun and lust
living night till day is a must
when flying around in private jets,
reckless buys, abysmall assets.
Dream and try and live=ENJOY!
Leave behind the life of coy.
New location, person too
no one ever know the past of fool.
Don't try to play me, I will win.
I own never ending acts of sin.
With no commitment fly I free
parties, drugs, sex, endless spree,
money cribs and jewels and shine,
hits and blunts and pills and lines.
White green riders here I come
to conquer you and all your fun.
Welcome me in your fancy fashion
with endless nights full of passion.
And maybe this sounds dumb to you
and like I can never make it through,
like this is just a dream of mine
and everyone will me decline,
but dad, I have to tell you this
that when I want that or this
it sure will happen cuz of my will,
for something like a dream or thrill,
the strongest will of all you could find
always takes over my lustful mind. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 66 [informant] => ediii [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Determined.

Contributed by ediii on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:21:02 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Cry. Cut. Drown.Slut.
Muse come to my assault.
Weakness through you face comes true,
I'm so much stronger, I know, you too.
Love is gone, pure business feeling,
when age comes I will stop the healing,
leave your side for riches will,
find my diamond on the hill.
Tear the bonds of sacred clan,
like the youngest bird of all
I will fly out to the world of damned,
will fly across the broadest brawl,
the coldest winter, hottest rain
information filled in brain.
Common sense, good looks and pride.
Look at that black minded bride
of success, riches,fun and lust
living night till day is a must
when flying around in private jets,
reckless buys, abysmall assets.
Dream and try and live=ENJOY!
Leave behind the life of coy.
New location, person too
no one ever know the past of fool.
Don't try to play me, I will win.
I own never ending acts of sin.
With no commitment fly I free
parties, drugs, sex, endless spree,
money cribs and jewels and shine,
hits and blunts and pills and lines.
White green riders here I come
to conquer you and all your fun.
Welcome me in your fancy fashion
with endless nights full of passion.
And maybe this sounds dumb to you
and like I can never make it through,
like this is just a dream of mine
and everyone will me decline,
but dad, I have to tell you this
that when I want that or this
it sure will happen cuz of my will,
for something like a dream or thrill,
the strongest will of all you could find
always takes over my lustful mind.

Copyright Â© ediii ... [ 2007-01-14 23:21:02]
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Re: Determined. (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:45:18 PM AEST
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The “party scene” can be lots of fun,
but also very dangerous. Great description
of being young and care free. Excellent
write!

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