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Array ( [sid] => 130503 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Not Human [time] => 2007-01-14 00:35:50 [hometext] => what's suicide, what do you see, hear feel? Why do you want to die, why do you hate yourself. [bodytext] => I look at my reflection in the glass
hoping and praying it's my turn to pass.
30 pills I take to ease my pain
while these suicide thoughts fill my brain.
I am not human I am flesh, blood and skin,
I am no hero for there are battles I can't win.
You look at me but don't know me at all

I'm not that girl that holds you when you cry
I'm not that girl that will never let you fall.
That girl with make-up and nice smile,
she hasn't been there for a while.

But still when you look at me that's all you see
but look a little harder for there is no real me.
As confusing as it sounds it makes a lot of sense
for this girl of which I speak of she no longer exists.

I am not life, but I am not death,
do you want to know the real me or who I am,
I'm standing in the mirror trying to figure it out.
I'm not human, I am Flesh, blood, and skin.

I am not really there I don't exsist.
The real me has no face of which to see,
The real me has no voice of which to speak.

I am not human I'm in your head,
I am the flesh of which you cut,
I am the blood of which you spill
I am the skin of which you once were
I am the light, the dark, the one that makes you cry.
You know what I am, I'm suicide [comments] => 6 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jtkzlimz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
I'm Not Human

Contributed by jtkzlimz on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 12:35:50 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I look at my reflection in the glass
hoping and praying it's my turn to pass.
30 pills I take to ease my pain
while these suicide thoughts fill my brain.
I am not human I am flesh, blood and skin,
I am no hero for there are battles I can't win.
You look at me but don't know me at all

I'm not that girl that holds you when you cry
I'm not that girl that will never let you fall.
That girl with make-up and nice smile,
she hasn't been there for a while.

But still when you look at me that's all you see
but look a little harder for there is no real me.
As confusing as it sounds it makes a lot of sense
for this girl of which I speak of she no longer exists.

I am not life, but I am not death,
do you want to know the real me or who I am,
I'm standing in the mirror trying to figure it out.
I'm not human, I am Flesh, blood, and skin.

I am not really there I don't exsist.
The real me has no face of which to see,
The real me has no voice of which to speak.

I am not human I'm in your head,
I am the flesh of which you cut,
I am the blood of which you spill
I am the skin of which you once were
I am the light, the dark, the one that makes you cry.
You know what I am, I'm suicide




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Re: I'm Not Human (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 12:45:54 AM AEST
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Intense write. Brought to me many mixed emotions while reading. I have been on the other end of suicide and can say it is such a painful experience to endure, one that never leaves.

I give this a ten

Michelle


Re: I'm Not Human (User Rating: 1 )
by webgoddess on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 01:51:22 AM AEST
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wow this is deep but a great personaal definition


Re: I'm Not Human (User Rating: 1 )
by MARYCORTEZ on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 02:29:20 AM AEST
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Stay strong and dont give up!


Re: I'm Not Human (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 08:38:33 AM AEST
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Intense write, I like how you portrayed the "demon" that drives the circumstances' consequences, can relate somewhat. Brilliant write! Have a good day and don't let life get you down, happens to everyone! Ciao


Re: I'm Not Human (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:30:58 AM AEST
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Sad but, a good write...Hoping you realize you deserve to live,you are human,you have a purpose in this world..Someone loves you..
Love yourself enough to save your life...

Blessings always..

C.S


Re: I'm Not Human (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:51:40 PM AEST
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This poem is very powerful and emotional.
Excellent choice of words and I liked how
you “dehumanized” yourself in this poem,
it’s very creative. Best of wishes!




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