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There it stays
Where it plays
Basking in its vacuum plight

In this way seeming to have light
Donned a blaze
Bustling haze
A phantom floating in the night

From blue to pink to green to white
To soft grays
The Milky Way’s
A guise that hides the black hole’s might
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THE GUISE

Contributed by HoneyCat on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 12:13:11 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Lusting after everything bright
There it stays
Where it plays
Basking in its vacuum plight

In this way seeming to have light
Donned a blaze
Bustling haze
A phantom floating in the night

From blue to pink to green to white
To soft grays
The Milky Way’s
A guise that hides the black hole’s might




Copyright © HoneyCat ... [ 2007-01-14 00:13:11]
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Re: THE GUISE (User Rating: 1 )
by Alex23 on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 12:59:29 AM AEST
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Wow...don't exaclty know what to think, which makes it great, being that it's open to interpretation! Nice rhyme scheme. To me, reinforces that life is always unique and a mystery within itself; that is's always changing. Great job!


Re: THE GUISE (User Rating: 1 )
by AngelFox on Saturday, 26th September 2009 @ 11:24:30 AM AEST
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Don't exactly know what it means. But who cares!!!
You manipulate words very well. You have a wicked sense of finding what word rhymes with the next the best. Great writing!!!


Re: THE GUISE (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 04:17:04 AM AEST
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good write, U have used black hole as a metaphor very well,
slick rhyme scheme...and the good thing is u have stuck to the technical details of a black hole very poetically :)

Good luck !




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