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Array ( [sid] => 130452 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Night You Left. [time] => 2007-01-12 19:21:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Just throw it back, for one more night,
For a star studded year, I did fight...
The ground did fold and etched on your heart,
are all the words I wrote...
And all my love, I did devote...
And on my shoulders angels sing
Singing hurt and breaking my heart
The song I wrote, it was for you
To live inside of me, I'm dying inside you
Lost inside your silence
The bones I had, turned into ash,
The world did cry the night you left,
and the night you left Was my living suicide
i swear to god that night i died...
I lost what was mine, and I want what was mine,
My heart did break, the blood did drip...
and you may take,
another wish, another kiss,
no more will for me to kill...
but please, come back to me...
I'll steal all of your kisses,
And sew them up,
In the creases of our hearts...
No matter where you go,
I'll be just a breath away,
For on my knees, my lips to your heart I pray...
Timing, timing is everything to me,
I'm dying here in front of you...
Life, is fading away....
But I look, your head is turned away...
From the moment you left I knew that something wasn't right...
But the feeling inside has kept me up all night....
You and me are like one heart-beat,
So slice open my veins...
And let, the romance bleed away...
For I...Bleed the love.
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The Night You Left.

Contributed by Bleedthelove on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 07:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Just throw it back, for one more night,
For a star studded year, I did fight...
The ground did fold and etched on your heart,
are all the words I wrote...
And all my love, I did devote...
And on my shoulders angels sing
Singing hurt and breaking my heart
The song I wrote, it was for you
To live inside of me, I'm dying inside you
Lost inside your silence
The bones I had, turned into ash,
The world did cry the night you left,
and the night you left Was my living suicide
i swear to god that night i died...
I lost what was mine, and I want what was mine,
My heart did break, the blood did drip...
and you may take,
another wish, another kiss,
no more will for me to kill...
but please, come back to me...
I'll steal all of your kisses,
And sew them up,
In the creases of our hearts...
No matter where you go,
I'll be just a breath away,
For on my knees, my lips to your heart I pray...
Timing, timing is everything to me,
I'm dying here in front of you...
Life, is fading away....
But I look, your head is turned away...
From the moment you left I knew that something wasn't right...
But the feeling inside has kept me up all night....
You and me are like one heart-beat,
So slice open my veins...
And let, the romance bleed away...
For I...Bleed the love.




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Re: The Night You Left. (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 12:06:01 PM AEST
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From open wounds and lunar cycles there is a truth that delivers in this piece.

Please Keep writing...

Good Job

Peace
Yangdantien


Re: The Night You Left. (User Rating: 1 )
by UrMyInspiration on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 07:51:54 PM AEST
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The world did cry the night you left,
and the night you left Was my living suicide...

You are such a powerful inspiration. The word is such a beautiful place because of the love people like you show. Keep writing...




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