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Array ( [sid] => 130407 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bruised. [time] => 2007-01-11 19:08:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've walked with demons,
I've walked with angels...
Laughin and schemin,
I am the truth,
I am the meaning...
who will stand by my side?
Crawling on my bloody knees...
Baby, I am a survivor,
Baby, I'm on fire
Just killing time,
Kiss my world goodbye,
Its all over now...
Yet Nothing is over now,
God knows I tried...
But no one understands me,
The black sheep of all eternity,
The un-original, they try to overtake me
Hating and mistreating,
Hurting me until they break me...
Look me in the eyes baby, ride with me,
Fly with me,
Love with me,
Die with me...
I know what you want,what you need,
I can make it real, hold it down,
Feel me bleed...
I keep my eyes on the stars,
That's where I come from,
Where I hide my scars...
And the Sun is my God,
To she I pray...
Everyday...
Minutes become hours, hours become days...
Days become months,
Months of twelve, come twelve of my love, come twelve strands of hope, come twelve steps of faith,
Twelve tears, twelve months, yes twelve ******** months...
two serial killers, two fireflies,
to live, to die...
It's my time,my fight night, my love sting, my broken wings...
Like a butterfly,
Born twice to fly...
Never give up,
Try, try, try...
Try. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Bruised.

Contributed by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 07:08:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I've walked with demons,
I've walked with angels...
Laughin and schemin,
I am the truth,
I am the meaning...
who will stand by my side?
Crawling on my bloody knees...
Baby, I am a survivor,
Baby, I'm on fire
Just killing time,
Kiss my world goodbye,
Its all over now...
Yet Nothing is over now,
God knows I tried...
But no one understands me,
The black sheep of all eternity,
The un-original, they try to overtake me
Hating and mistreating,
Hurting me until they break me...
Look me in the eyes baby, ride with me,
Fly with me,
Love with me,
Die with me...
I know what you want,what you need,
I can make it real, hold it down,
Feel me bleed...
I keep my eyes on the stars,
That's where I come from,
Where I hide my scars...
And the Sun is my God,
To she I pray...
Everyday...
Minutes become hours, hours become days...
Days become months,
Months of twelve, come twelve of my love, come twelve strands of hope, come twelve steps of faith,
Twelve tears, twelve months, yes twelve ******** months...
two serial killers, two fireflies,
to live, to die...
It's my time,my fight night, my love sting, my broken wings...
Like a butterfly,
Born twice to fly...
Never give up,
Try, try, try...
Try.




Copyright © Bleedthelove ... [ 2007-01-11 19:08:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Bruised. (User Rating: 1 )
by behind0this0mask on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 07:29:29 PM AEST
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i really like your writing


Re: Bruised. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 08:07:07 PM AEST
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another beautiful write.. this one is sorta sad yet the end brings about some hope. I really enjoyed this piece..

vampyress Jenni


Re: Bruised. (User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 06:00:39 AM AEST
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good read...


Re: Bruised. (User Rating: 1 )
by skibblez on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 07:08:47 AM AEST
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i really like thiz alot itz really cumin from tha heart and thats wut i like i dont like wut everybodii els haz alreaddy heard sumtin firmiliar too♥


Re: Bruised. (User Rating: 1 )
by skibblez on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 07:13:06 AM AEST
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i really like thiz alot itz really cumin from tha heart and thats wut i like i dont like wut everybodii els haz alreaddy heard sumtin firmiliar too♥


Re: Bruised. (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:43:22 AM AEST
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awesome poem!




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