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Array ( [sid] => 130398 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Essence [time] => 2007-01-11 15:29:19 [hometext] => *Rest.With.Peace Great Grandma Bonnie* [Not the best write but it was the product of my hand after a death about a year and a half ago] [bodytext] =>
Trip
I fall hopelessly
Loosing my grip
On my reality
Realize
I wish I could soon
Close my eyes
And I see the same darkness
Feeling this loss
I can still hear your voice
You play in my head
Your image the same old voice; I have no choice
Sleepless I lay in this bed
I hear it was painless
That a smile still dances upon your lips
Your life long and shameless
And now you're gone
Out of life to live
Somewhere I hope you'll still watch the dawn
Stretching across an infinite sky only to
Give
Light so I can find my way
Wishing to still have your guidance
Now I just hope to meet again one day
I could call your name but I'd only know silence
Able to feel all the sadness as it seeps
Through
Into me
Though it's all for you
And you'll have my love for eternity
I hope you see clearly
Everything and that you'll help everybody
That are of common blood
I hope that you're okay
And I will hold onto you
Each comming day
In any possible way...





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Essence

Contributed by CuriousitysCat on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 03:29:19 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Trip
I fall hopelessly
Loosing my grip
On my reality
Realize
I wish I could soon
Close my eyes
And I see the same darkness
Feeling this loss
I can still hear your voice
You play in my head
Your image the same old voice; I have no choice
Sleepless I lay in this bed
I hear it was painless
That a smile still dances upon your lips
Your life long and shameless
And now you're gone
Out of life to live
Somewhere I hope you'll still watch the dawn
Stretching across an infinite sky only to
Give
Light so I can find my way
Wishing to still have your guidance
Now I just hope to meet again one day
I could call your name but I'd only know silence
Able to feel all the sadness as it seeps
Through
Into me
Though it's all for you
And you'll have my love for eternity
I hope you see clearly
Everything and that you'll help everybody
That are of common blood
I hope that you're okay
And I will hold onto you
Each comming day
In any possible way...









Copyright © CuriousitysCat ... [ 2007-01-11 15:29:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Essence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 04:13:10 PM AEST
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I dont know, I think ti conveys the feels of loosing a loved one rather well.


Re: Essence (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 04:43:46 PM AEST
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Maiden, Mother & Crone...Bonnie having been all has earned her eyes in the sky & I have no doubt they are often cast on you w/ love, pride & joy!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
~MisfitMum


Re: Essence (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 06:02:47 PM AEST
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A memorial to a good soul and wonderful person to so have touched the generations she gave rise to...Our Bonnie lass be over the ocean of spirit...

An amazing an special essence of wisdom is distilled by "Grand" mothers when absorbed it delivers a pearl of knowledge that shines every time we look upon it.

I am sure she smiles upon you in loving radiant guidance.

Peace
Yang


Re: Essence (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 11:20:56 PM AEST
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I look forward to meeting Bonnie someday when I pass to the other side. She sounded like a fantastic woman. You shine with this write, sis. Shine like a bright star. Bonnie's smiling...I can just feel it.
*hugs you tight*
Laura


Re: Essence (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:50:32 PM AEST
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Your grandmother must have been an
amazing person to have had such a deep
impact on your life. This poem is filled
with tenderness and despair. Once again,
another beautiful poem.




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