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Array ( [sid] => 130376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crewel Lye [time] => 2007-01-10 23:36:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I look out the window
and I sigh
as I think to myself
I'm moody and lonely
ever since you left,
you said you don't want me
you made that very clear....
I don't think you
ever really cared.

All the things we use to do
I now do with someone new
still everyday
I wish to be with you.
I can't think
I don't sleep
I don't know what to do....
all I want is you.

I now know the reasons
our love
could not survive
all the kisses and promises
were just an Illusion
a crewel lye,
the candle light's casting shadows
and a silent tear flows
as I
relive another painful memory,
I'm hurt
and I'm lonely
I never should have tried...
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 22 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Crewel Lye

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 11:36:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I look out the window
and I sigh
as I think to myself
I'm moody and lonely
ever since you left,
you said you don't want me
you made that very clear....
I don't think you
ever really cared.

All the things we use to do
I now do with someone new
still everyday
I wish to be with you.
I can't think
I don't sleep
I don't know what to do....
all I want is you.

I now know the reasons
our love
could not survive
all the kisses and promises
were just an Illusion
a crewel lye,
the candle light's casting shadows
and a silent tear flows
as I
relive another painful memory,
I'm hurt
and I'm lonely
I never should have tried...

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2007-01-10 23:36:52]
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Re: Crewel Lye (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:12:23 AM AEST
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ALOT OF FEELING-& A GREAT WRITE! I ALSO THOUGHT HOW YOU SPELLED OUT THE TITLE WAS COOL-AN ATTENTION GETTER!!

DAN!!!

Re: Crewel Lye (User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 06:03:27 AM AEST
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brilliant! good read..
keep posting...

Re: Crewel Lye (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:14:15 AM AEST
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Emotional piece. Nicely written.

Re: Crewel Lye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:26:44 AM AEST
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So sad.
Cheer up, my friend as joy cometh in the morning.
Big huggs,
emy

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