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make everybody cry..
I want to write sad song
how the Cowboy rides away.

I want to make it lonely
someone" searching the moon,
I want to write forever"
and write.. it never" will come true...

I want to write a sad song
woman or a man..
put it in a dream i`ve had
give them both to you...

I want to write a sad song...Vincent

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Sad Song

Contributed by crow on Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:11:11 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I want to write a sad song
make everybody cry..
I want to write sad song
how the Cowboy rides away.

I want to make it lonely
someone" searching the moon,
I want to write forever"
and write.. it never" will come true...

I want to write a sad song
woman or a man..
put it in a dream i`ve had
give them both to you...

I want to write a sad song...Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2007-01-10 22:11:11]
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Re: Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 10:24:25 AM AEST
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Ahhh Vincent..this felt so sad to me. There feels such a longing here. Something which you deeply want but cannot obtain. Short piece and to the point.
Peace, Laura

Re: Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:18:29 PM AEST
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this is such a powerful write.. it has a feeling of needing something or wanting that you can't quite get to.. I liked the stanzas and wording to this.. great job

vampyress Jenni

Re: Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 03:19:38 PM AEST
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So sad for my mm. Whats up ey?

~Michelle~

Re: Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 09:11:46 PM AEST
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It sounds good loved the tune also

Shari

Re: Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 11:37:30 PM AEST
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So few words can say so much. Vincent this is so sad. I can feel your sadness & longing throughout this piece. May your heart never habour any sadness my dear friend. Sending you a rainbow of happiness to wash away your blues.
huge hugs,
sue m

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