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Array ( [sid] => 130322 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I life worth living? [time] => 2007-01-09 20:11:24 [hometext] => This poem could fit under so many topics...Drug addiction, lost love, love remembered, love pretty much anyway, emotional poetry...So many topics... [bodytext] => I met this girl named Chelsea Delker...
Her heart was filled with gold...
We played a prank...
We fell in love...
She stacked that gold in my empty heart...
And gave me reason...
And gave me love...
Happiness had been reached...
Perfection became reality...
Not a day spent alone...
A Smile left unfelt...
And suddenly it hit me...
My angel had shown herself...

And then things happened...
Things were done...
And things were said...
Hearts were broken...
And tears were shed...
All this pain shall not be shared...
And suddenly it hit me...
My angel was gone...
Just like that...

I started to wonder...
I started to dream...
That life should end pretty soon...
That maybe it'd be best...
I had become another drone...
Lifeless inside pretending to breathe...
I thought I had been lost...
That I had bleed to feel warm...
My angel was lost...
And I was gone...

Dear diary...
I saw her today...
She was different inside...
But then I knew what I had to do...
I couldn't watch her disapear again...
I had to reach out my hand...
I touched my past...
And I felt again...
My angel came out from hiding...

She told me life could go on...
She told me she had already moved on...
She still held me high...
Spun my life around...
Pointed down a path...
And took my hand...
Started me down that path...
Walked with me...
Until I could move on my own...
My angel saved a life...
The least important of all...

The sun still does shine...
But she told me it was time...
She must go...
And help a man in her need...
Today I felt cheated...
But I was not broken...
I had learned...
Learned what love really means...
I sit here now...
In my quiet house...
With tears...
But a smile as well...
My angel loves me...
She really does...


This poem isn't a poem that is supposed to be well written or in perfect format or anything like that. It's just something I wrote..And I want to share it with you...


As of today I have been clean of drugs for over 3 months...I was addicted to Cocaine, and I smoked Marijuana at least 15 times a day, never was I sober. She has a boyfriend now. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Poser [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I life worth living?

Contributed by Poser on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 08:11:24 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I met this girl named Chelsea Delker...
Her heart was filled with gold...
We played a prank...
We fell in love...
She stacked that gold in my empty heart...
And gave me reason...
And gave me love...
Happiness had been reached...
Perfection became reality...
Not a day spent alone...
A Smile left unfelt...
And suddenly it hit me...
My angel had shown herself...

And then things happened...
Things were done...
And things were said...
Hearts were broken...
And tears were shed...
All this pain shall not be shared...
And suddenly it hit me...
My angel was gone...
Just like that...

I started to wonder...
I started to dream...
That life should end pretty soon...
That maybe it'd be best...
I had become another drone...
Lifeless inside pretending to breathe...
I thought I had been lost...
That I had bleed to feel warm...
My angel was lost...
And I was gone...

Dear diary...
I saw her today...
She was different inside...
But then I knew what I had to do...
I couldn't watch her disapear again...
I had to reach out my hand...
I touched my past...
And I felt again...
My angel came out from hiding...

She told me life could go on...
She told me she had already moved on...
She still held me high...
Spun my life around...
Pointed down a path...
And took my hand...
Started me down that path...
Walked with me...
Until I could move on my own...
My angel saved a life...
The least important of all...

The sun still does shine...
But she told me it was time...
She must go...
And help a man in her need...
Today I felt cheated...
But I was not broken...
I had learned...
Learned what love really means...
I sit here now...
In my quiet house...
With tears...
But a smile as well...
My angel loves me...
She really does...


This poem isn't a poem that is supposed to be well written or in perfect format or anything like that. It's just something I wrote..And I want to share it with you...


As of today I have been clean of drugs for over 3 months...I was addicted to Cocaine, and I smoked Marijuana at least 15 times a day, never was I sober. She has a boyfriend now.




Copyright © Poser ... [ 2007-01-09 20:11:24]
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Re: I life worth living? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 12:59:43 PM AEST
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wow a beautifully sad write.. you can feel the pain and emotion in this.. congrats on being clean.. awesome write though

vampyress Jenni




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