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Array ( [sid] => 130314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => feelings fade pt 3 [time] => 2007-01-09 17:16:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => as feelings began to fade i saw that look in her eyes
i felt the same shame that i feel all of the time
she held my hand and i began to feel the pain rise
i felt my eyes swell she does this everytime

i could have cried then, i should have cried then

and as the walls come down i feel the pain subside
its like shes teasing me she does this everytime

i am to connected to slip away, fade away
i still feel you touching me, changing me

once again theres that look in her eyes
i feel it changing me and i could hear the cries
why is this dangerously
changing my life

i should have cried then, i could have cried then

cause i am to ignorant to, see the truth, feel the truth
i still feel you touching me changing me

i wanna open up my eyes, and this nightmare end
and this pain end
im sick of this tormenting illusion
im sick of this tormenting confusion
i cant see anymore i cant feel anymore
i wanna throw it all away and start over today
i wanna feel the rythm take my soul
i wanna feel the rythm take control
i wanna stop this endless fight
i want to know that everything going to be alright
i want to feel it turn to rage
i want this debt to be paid
all i want and all i need is for these feelings just to fade

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feelings fade pt 3

Contributed by boredoms_burden on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 05:16:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



as feelings began to fade i saw that look in her eyes
i felt the same shame that i feel all of the time
she held my hand and i began to feel the pain rise
i felt my eyes swell she does this everytime

i could have cried then, i should have cried then

and as the walls come down i feel the pain subside
its like shes teasing me she does this everytime

i am to connected to slip away, fade away
i still feel you touching me, changing me

once again theres that look in her eyes
i feel it changing me and i could hear the cries
why is this dangerously
changing my life

i should have cried then, i could have cried then

cause i am to ignorant to, see the truth, feel the truth
i still feel you touching me changing me

i wanna open up my eyes, and this nightmare end
and this pain end
im sick of this tormenting illusion
im sick of this tormenting confusion
i cant see anymore i cant feel anymore
i wanna throw it all away and start over today
i wanna feel the rythm take my soul
i wanna feel the rythm take control
i wanna stop this endless fight
i want to know that everything going to be alright
i want to feel it turn to rage
i want this debt to be paid
all i want and all i need is for these feelings just to fade





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Re: feelings fade pt 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 09:20:55 AM AEST
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thank you for sharing...


Re: feelings fade pt 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnRobbins on Sunday, 20th September 2009 @ 10:44:33 AM AEST
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A feeling that can haunt us all great closing
lines indeed.
Pain in almostline great depth .
And all around great poem


Re: feelings fade pt 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by VR2776 on Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 11:18:56 AM AEST
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Wow I loved this ....this is an absolute beautiful poem and love what it says ...Great Job




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