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Over Sorrow’s Peak
Blood red moon shows
Death to the meek

Many hearts broken
Many left to mourn
Many will live to rue
The day that they were born

Crystal dew on violets
Crushed beneath her feet
Tortured soul no longer
Innocent and sweet

Bringing forward spirits
Better left in hell
Revenge her only motive
In bitterness she dwells

Blood will be the payment
For the evil she will loose
Upon the quiet little town
From a tree she ties a noose

On Sorrow’s Peak
The tall oak tree stands
And here like her Grandmother
She will join Satan’s band

For once before a young woman
Hung from the old oak tree
After letting loose Demons
Upon the community

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Sorrow's Peak

Contributed by NoSaint on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 11:30:08 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Mist rises mournfully
Over Sorrow’s Peak
Blood red moon shows
Death to the meek

Many hearts broken
Many left to mourn
Many will live to rue
The day that they were born

Crystal dew on violets
Crushed beneath her feet
Tortured soul no longer
Innocent and sweet

Bringing forward spirits
Better left in hell
Revenge her only motive
In bitterness she dwells

Blood will be the payment
For the evil she will loose
Upon the quiet little town
From a tree she ties a noose

On Sorrow’s Peak
The tall oak tree stands
And here like her Grandmother
She will join Satan’s band

For once before a young woman
Hung from the old oak tree
After letting loose Demons
Upon the community

Copyright Â© NoSaint ... [ 2007-01-09 11:30:08]
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Re: Sorrow's Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 11:42:09 AM AEST
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OOOoooo Shari, I liked this. A bit of a spine-tingler. I loved stanza number three with the mention of the crushed violets..I was picturing it perfectly in my mind..along with that old oak tree.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Sorrow's Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 01:13:41 PM AEST
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wow beautifully dark.. its tells a dark story.. I love the ending also.. very good imgary.. thanks for sharing this piece

vampyress Jenni

Re: Sorrow's Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 03:46:25 PM AEST
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A wonderful and beautiful, albeit dark, story poem magnificently penned. Kudos, Shari! 'N' a tip o' my cowboy hat to ya!

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: Sorrow's Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by mazeof_darkness on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:17:30 PM AEST
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So sad it is, but beautifully written. Great work!!!

Re: Sorrow's Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:29:58 PM AEST
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got chills on the spine good job!

Michelle

Re: Sorrow's Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 07:47:15 PM AEST
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Shades of the 'Burning Times' of Salem and mindsets en rapt with fears and evils pursuing divinity...

Well Done

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: Sorrow's Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 08:21:27 PM AEST
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damn" this is excellent my friend, I enjoyed the read..Crow

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