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I've tried to fight it....... can't believe.
The very thing that restored some of my confidence,
could break my dream.

I thought I was finally getting it,
but like every other time........

You chose to be the one to shoot me down,
my life in rewind.

I don't belong here anyway,
never did you see?

For I'm far better than this........
and I don't care if you don't believe. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 21 [informant] => mazeof_darkness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Break My Dream

Contributed by mazeof_darkness on Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 11:28:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I've tried to fight it....... can't believe.
The very thing that restored some of my confidence,
could break my dream.

I thought I was finally getting it,
but like every other time........

You chose to be the one to shoot me down,
my life in rewind.

I don't belong here anyway,
never did you see?

For I'm far better than this........
and I don't care if you don't believe.

Copyright © mazeof_darkness ... [ 2007-01-08 23:28:58]
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Re: Break My Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 10:06:19 PM AEST
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This is true poetry, and even more true life.I enjoyed reading this, you write well.

Thank you for your comment also.

myheartsvoice

Re: Break My Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 03:13:21 PM AEST
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You said this point on.. Yes how it is poetic and like Ben said so true to life you hit it with this one......

is a lonely road to travel when you find this lesson out at times indeed..

lovely write

Michelle

Re: Break My Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 01:10:12 AM AEST
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I like the strength you show in this poem, a strength that shines through the difficulties and keeps you going.
Great rhythm also, the words flow effortlessly.

Take care,
Dom

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