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A man in the tree starts
Talking to me?
He's singing a song who's
Vocalist reminds me of
The cause for trouble
In paradise
She's insane
And so while I'm being serenaded
By treeman insane vocalist
And thoughts of the unstable woman
I slip into my
Place of thought
To be bitten by guilt
And formulate my gratefulness
And being vocal is me
But I keep in mind
To passively observe is
To learn a lot
The wisdom touches me
At the most unoften moments
In time
But for now I sit and sip
At the cup of knowledge
As others teach me
What it is
To feel...

~ThEnD [comments] => 6 [counter] => 302 [topic] => 49 [informant] => CuriousitysCat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective

Contributed by CuriousitysCat on Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 06:45:38 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

What am I to think when
A man in the tree starts
Talking to me?
He's singing a song who's
Vocalist reminds me of
The cause for trouble
In paradise
She's insane
And so while I'm being serenaded
By treeman insane vocalist
And thoughts of the unstable woman
I slip into my
Place of thought
To be bitten by guilt
And formulate my gratefulness
And being vocal is me
But I keep in mind
To passively observe is
To learn a lot
The wisdom touches me
At the most unoften moments
In time
But for now I sit and sip
At the cup of knowledge
As others teach me
What it is
To feel...

~ThEnD

Copyright Â© CuriousitysCat ... [ 2007-01-07 18:45:38]
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Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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Trees have such real voices that it's near impossible to not find faces in them...

BigLoveMuchPeace,
~MisfitMum

Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective (User Rating: 1 )
by trixxx on Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 08:17:03 AM AEST
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Great poem, I think I share these feeling sometimes

I've always held as a saying:
'A vivid imagination is the most reliable friend you can have'

Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 09:54:00 AM AEST
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I love how a poem reveals the writers character and upbringing :)

"...I slip into my
Place of thought
To be bitten by guilt
And formulate my gratefulness..."

A Toast to the Next One Hundred Years as you... :)

"...sit and sip
At the cup of knowledge..."

Here's to your parents and the good moral fiber in you as we all learn to do & feel by the other's example...

Thank You
Good Job

Peace
Yang

Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 04:11:19 PM AEST
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nicly done, the title really caught my eye because the Boom Boom Satalites had a trak on one of their CDs with the lyrics "Your fantasy's a reality but your reality is killing me"

Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:36:44 PM AEST
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I really liked your use of metaphors in this poem.
Your choice of scenery and characters are
very original. These lines have really captured
my attention:

“But for now I sit and sip
At the cup of knowledge”

Great work!

Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnRhinem on Saturday, 9th August 2014 @ 05:39:34 PM AEST
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I love your name, baby girl! |*:*(*{{.....Keep sipping as brushing, Tinkerbell!

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