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[aid] => mick
[title] => Revised version of Fantasy
[time] => 2007-01-07 18:02:50
[hometext] => this is a new version of this poem so much better comment if u wish
[bodytext] => Fantasy... Weary lids fall to block out the light of the earth My possessed mind slips in to my subconscious A universe of mystery appears Dragons, wizard and beasts of the night Trials and journeys lay ahead of me As i venture into a land That lay beyond the natural world No calm oceans await me in my slumber My trouble mind gives way to nightmares Black nights along a dark somber country side Lay way to creatures of the shadow Fearsome and tough No doubt metaphors Representing the surpressed woes of the day As dinosaurs chase me through congested jungles I must run light- footed to stray from their bite I awake after falling into an atramentous abyss Fatigued and discontented Hours of luminosty are upon me now What will dive into the deepest caverns of my mind Only to manifest itself when the moon shines bright by jess [comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 40 [informant] => detourchick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
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