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We’ll wear the evening sky,
The wind will be our symphony,
And we’ll move to a sultry beat.
Take me in your arms now baby,
Swing me round and bout,
Twirl and swirl me darling,
But careful not to fall.
Now listen to that rhythm!
All that lovely jazz…
Yes, we’re dancing on a cloud,
Leave the whole world far behind.
There’s no one here but the angels,
They gave us the stars for candles.
The fireflies will watch us dance,
As you swing me round and bout,
Twirling and swirling darling,
We’re careful not to fall.
Now what a pretty pair!
And all that lovely jazz…
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Dancing On a Cloud

Contributed by clarity_rising on Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 12:33:46 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

Let’s dance upon a cloud,
We’ll wear the evening sky,
The wind will be our symphony,
And we’ll move to a sultry beat.
Take me in your arms now baby,
Swing me round and bout,
Twirl and swirl me darling,
But careful not to fall.
Now listen to that rhythm!
All that lovely jazz…
Yes, we’re dancing on a cloud,
Leave the whole world far behind.
There’s no one here but the angels,
They gave us the stars for candles.
The fireflies will watch us dance,
As you swing me round and bout,
Twirling and swirling darling,
We’re careful not to fall.
Now what a pretty pair!
And all that lovely jazz…

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Re: Dancing On a Cloud (User Rating: 1 )
by Muhammadshanazar on Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:18:31 AM AEST
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A beautiful idea the whole universe appears to be a musical theatre and a dancing hall.Nice people only have the nice ideas. Well done.
love and hugs
Muhammad Shanazar

Re: Dancing On a Cloud (User Rating: 1 )
by CuriousitysCat on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 10:32:51 AM AEST
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That's it you are definately one of my new favorite poets, this really gave me the image of a more intimate ballroom dancing spectacle. The kind no one sees and therefor is so much more intimate, the kind one wishes to see but just doesn't. Right on again, I hope you post much more.

;]

~JaZz

Re: Dancing On a Cloud (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 02:48:05 PM AEST
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All that lovely jazz indeed, a symphany of words that create strong imagery

Shari

Re: Dancing On a Cloud (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 10:13:24 PM AEST
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beautufully done! your 'darling' is truly a lucky one... that night i'm sure the dance floor was illuminated liek never before...

wiz

Re: Dancing On a Cloud (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 05:04:23 PM AEST
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Wow, Clarity this is a warm, beautiful & dreamy write. This is exactly what I needed to read to brighten up my lousy day. Heavenly beautiful a match made in heaven. Impressive as always. Keep up the stellar work~
*moon smiles*
sue m

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