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Array ( [sid] => 130226 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He comes at night [time] => 2007-01-07 11:19:23 [hometext] => interpretations are free [bodytext] => He comes at night
In the darkest nights
Enters your room
You hear his steps
But you can’t move
You can see his scary face
But you can’t scream
In your bed you are frozen
You can feel his hand on your body
Slipping it under your shirt
You can feel his heavy breath
Hot hot
Like a wild dragon breathing out fire
You can smell his sweat
When his body is next to you
You can hear your heartbeats
You are screaming
But no voice is coming out
You are running
But your legs are like jelly
You want to wake up from this nightmare
But you can’t
Because it’s a reality
And you can’t escape
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 13 [informant] => heba48 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

He comes at night

Contributed by heba48 on Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 11:19:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He comes at night
In the darkest nights
Enters your room
You hear his steps
But you can’t move
You can see his scary face
But you can’t scream
In your bed you are frozen
You can feel his hand on your body
Slipping it under your shirt
You can feel his heavy breath
Hot hot
Like a wild dragon breathing out fire
You can smell his sweat
When his body is next to you
You can hear your heartbeats
You are screaming
But no voice is coming out
You are running
But your legs are like jelly
You want to wake up from this nightmare
But you can’t
Because it’s a reality
And you can’t escape

Copyright Â© heba48 ... [ 2007-01-07 11:19:23]
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Re: He comes at night (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 11:31:59 AM AEST
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Very intense write. My interpretation...is a horrible view....of a child being molested. Maybe I am wrong here. Good write to evoke such feelings of terror, sadness and outrage.
Much peace,
Laura

Re: He comes at night (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 12:19:08 PM AEST
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I agree, this is pointed, and can be a terrible ordeal. truth is..goes right to a heart. Crow

Re: He comes at night (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 07:11:06 PM AEST
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Well I agree with deadhead, that's what I see too.
It's a terrible fact that is very painfull to live as I can relate.
Great writing.
Hang tuff friend, and I'm hear if ya need to rattle just p.m. me.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: He comes at night (User Rating: 1 )
by RunawayAngel on Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 04:33:16 PM AEST
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very sad but a good write

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