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Array ( [sid] => 130177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love is blind, and I'll just close my eyes. [time] => 2007-01-05 20:35:43 [hometext] => Im going to make changes, first write in forever...please leave advice<3 [bodytext] => And with these words
I'll toss and turn
on a cold tiled floor
or a bed where love turned war
but I think I'll take my chances
and sink into your side of the matress.
Dreaming up old memories
of picnicks on the shore
dancing til our feet couldn't stand anymore

And what went wrong?
Did you find it is not my hand that in yours should belong?
or do my eyes not sparkle as much as they used too?
Did I just get old, and my use through?

I don't like you always being on my mind
I should have known, but love is blind?
and now Im lost, torn, and bruised
while your with her..satisfied, and amused. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 22 [informant] => emocutie07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Love is blind, and I'll just close my eyes.

Contributed by emocutie07 on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 08:35:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

And with these words
I'll toss and turn
on a cold tiled floor
or a bed where love turned war
but I think I'll take my chances
and sink into your side of the matress.
Dreaming up old memories
of picnicks on the shore
dancing til our feet couldn't stand anymore

And what went wrong?
Did you find it is not my hand that in yours should belong?
or do my eyes not sparkle as much as they used too?
Did I just get old, and my use through?

I don't like you always being on my mind
I should have known, but love is blind?
and now Im lost, torn, and bruised
while your with her..satisfied, and amused.

Copyright © emocutie07 ... [ 2007-01-05 20:35:43]
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Re: Love is blind, and I'll just close my eyes. (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 09:41:46 AM AEST
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verry nice and sad as well, i like it the way it is, so the only advice i can give is keep them coming

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