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Array ( [sid] => 130151 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The weight of life [time] => 2007-01-05 03:27:45 [hometext] => I wrote this awhile ago when I was really depressed...I overcame it so don't worry. Hope you like it. [bodytext] => The weight of my life upon my hands
I hold my head and cry
I measure my life by broken hearts
Finding it hard to die

Pain travels through my body
Weakening my soul
Worth counted through my failures
How do I mend this hole

Staring straight out at the world
I turn away my face
Allowing myself to shut it out
I’m taken from this place

My worthless vessel left behind
A hollow shell of me
My life would just get worse
Had I not set it free
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 36 [informant] => goodandevil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
The weight of life

Contributed by goodandevil on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 03:27:45 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



The weight of my life upon my hands
I hold my head and cry
I measure my life by broken hearts
Finding it hard to die

Pain travels through my body
Weakening my soul
Worth counted through my failures
How do I mend this hole

Staring straight out at the world
I turn away my face
Allowing myself to shut it out
I’m taken from this place

My worthless vessel left behind
A hollow shell of me
My life would just get worse
Had I not set it free




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Re: The weight of life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 03:38:12 AM AEST
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Happy 2 hear u got thru this.
Awesome writing!
huggs,
emy


Re: The weight of life (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverDagger on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 06:34:13 AM AEST
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Lovely write!

My worthless vessel left behind
A hollow shell of me
My life would just get worse
Had I not set it free


I've often felt this way, especially last year when I made repeated attempts. So, I guess all that I can say to you is that I hope you don't feel this way again and I admire the fact that you got over feeling this way.

Keep up the great writing!


Re: The weight of life (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 01:13:09 PM AEST
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Glad to know you got over this
i know the feeling.
good work capturing the pain.
i like this poem very much




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