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Array ( [sid] => 130111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moments lost [time] => 2007-01-04 00:51:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There is a reason
I need
something to believe in
what it is I don't know,
do I want love
or is it
just another drug,
confusions come on strong
Illusions
ebb and flow
and they last to long.

I walk into a crowd
mingle and giggle
trying not to be bored,
as someones talking
I pretend to listen...
I do it
because I don't wanna be Ignored.
As I flow
I suddenly stop
and get this mental feeling
cause
Ive forgotten
what I was talking for.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Moments lost

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 12:51:36 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

There is a reason
I need
something to believe in
what it is I don't know,
do I want love
or is it
just another drug,
confusions come on strong
Illusions
ebb and flow
and they last to long.

I walk into a crowd
mingle and giggle
trying not to be bored,
as someones talking
I pretend to listen...
I do it
because I don't wanna be Ignored.
As I flow
I suddenly stop
and get this mental feeling
cause
Ive forgotten
what I was talking for.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2007-01-04 00:51:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Moments lost (User Rating: 1 )
by DeepaliDoshi on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 03:03:30 AM AEST
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at some point everyone feels like this... its amazing you could put it to words

Re: Moments lost (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 03:37:43 AM AEST
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Uhhuh tony,
sendmesomeofthat.
big smiles,
emy

Re: Moments lost (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 10:55:55 PM AEST
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Ya know I had a really big and insightful comment but it slipped right out my brain... I look forward to Moments Regained...

Really Good Job

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: Moments lost (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:09:05 PM AEST
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a powerful introduction in those first lines more than just poetry there's a lot of mystery going on between the lines of life and love. a good comunicative style you have.

myheartsvoice

Re: Moments lost (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 05:03:24 PM AEST
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Whether I walk among people or among trees I always ask who, what am I in relation to this.
As to what we really want. I think life has set us free to discover this as we journey through.
I enjoyed this piece as it questions not only you but anyone reading what the moment we are in means to us.Thank you

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