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Array ( [sid] => 130107 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drifting Away [time] => 2007-01-03 23:10:05 [hometext] => about an unsure feeling i have. [bodytext] => It doesn't make sense
Why is this pain so immense?
I see you everday
You make me smile in everyway
We're closer than anyone
When im sad you're the one to which i run
But now it feels different
It feels like the person you were has gone and went
You dont talk to me as much
I dont get the same feeling with your touch
I come home and cry
Because deep inside
Im wondering if im losing my best friend
I cant make it without you
You're the one who pulled me through
All the heartbreak and pain
All my thoughs i had taken in vain
Wiped my tears and held me close
Until i met you i didnt believe in heroes
You saved my life and sanity
You showed me the beauty I couldnt see
Please dont leave me alone
Dont leave me on my own
Through all the pain from my broken mind
You stayed close by my side
Dont drift away like everyone else
Because then there wont be anyone who can help


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 48 [informant] => liindso14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Drifting Away

Contributed by liindso14 on Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 11:10:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



It doesn't make sense
Why is this pain so immense?
I see you everday
You make me smile in everyway
We're closer than anyone
When im sad you're the one to which i run
But now it feels different
It feels like the person you were has gone and went
You dont talk to me as much
I dont get the same feeling with your touch
I come home and cry
Because deep inside
Im wondering if im losing my best friend
I cant make it without you
You're the one who pulled me through
All the heartbreak and pain
All my thoughs i had taken in vain
Wiped my tears and held me close
Until i met you i didnt believe in heroes
You saved my life and sanity
You showed me the beauty I couldnt see
Please dont leave me alone
Dont leave me on my own
Through all the pain from my broken mind
You stayed close by my side
Dont drift away like everyone else
Because then there wont be anyone who can help






Copyright © liindso14 ... [ 2007-01-03 23:10:05]
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Re: Drifting Away (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 11:28:24 PM AEST
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A very powerfull, touching, tender write.
huggs,
emy


Re: Drifting Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 07:05:54 PM AEST
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I think this poem is one of my special favorites. I know how you feel, I have been close to a couple of people who had helped me though the pain even though they didn't have to, always made me laugh and always saw in me that I never would have seen. But they too, like your friend, have drifted away and I am left broken hearted. I really feel for you. this is a nreally great poem and I hope you write more like it!




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