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Array ( [sid] => 130067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I need you [time] => 2007-01-02 20:38:34 [hometext] => This is a quick little poem I just typed up. I hope you like it! [bodytext] => Help me
Just for tonight
Tell me I’ll be okay
Say everything will be alright

Tell me I am loved
Tell me I always will be.
Even though they are all lies
I need to hear them.

Hug me and make it okay
I can’t help but feel this way.
Touch me and say “don’t be scared”
Please, I’m terrified.

I can’t help but think
About the pills in the bathroom
About the knife in the kitchen
About the cleaner in the closet.

My death is awaiting me.
Please,
Stop it quick.
I need to be here.
With you.

Sing to me our song
The one we always sing
I can’t think if the words,
But I know they are somewhere.

Help me pick up the pieces
They are all over the floor
And I can’t do it alone.

Kiss me till I cry
Love me till I cry
Hug me till I cry
Be with me till I die.

Please, stay with me tonight
You always make everything alright. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 36 [informant] => sweetkisses0741 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
I need you

Contributed by sweetkisses0741 on Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 08:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Help me
Just for tonight
Tell me I’ll be okay
Say everything will be alright

Tell me I am loved
Tell me I always will be.
Even though they are all lies
I need to hear them.

Hug me and make it okay
I can’t help but feel this way.
Touch me and say “don’t be scared”
Please, I’m terrified.

I can’t help but think
About the pills in the bathroom
About the knife in the kitchen
About the cleaner in the closet.

My death is awaiting me.
Please,
Stop it quick.
I need to be here.
With you.

Sing to me our song
The one we always sing
I can’t think if the words,
But I know they are somewhere.

Help me pick up the pieces
They are all over the floor
And I can’t do it alone.

Kiss me till I cry
Love me till I cry
Hug me till I cry
Be with me till I die.

Please, stay with me tonight
You always make everything alright.




Copyright © sweetkisses0741 ... [ 2007-01-02 20:38:34]
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Re: I need you (User Rating: 1 )
by KillerLadysKiss on Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 10:24:06 PM AEST
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You did a really good job it was really touching. And I see the pain as well as feel it.




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