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To those I’ve ever hurt,
To you I’ve held close,
To those I’ve pushed away,
To you I've wanted so badly,
To those I've lied to,
To you I've tried to change for,
To those I've changed because of,
To you who have kept me strong,
To those who have torn me down,
To you who stayed and loved me,
To those who left me for the crowds,
To you who made me smile through my tears,
To those who showed me life,
To you whom all my thoughts belong,
To those who gave me another chance.
To everyone who drove me to this:
To an emotional suicide,
To a deadness of heart no love can revive.
To a search for truth, wherever it may be,
To a longing for oneness with anyone.
To scars and hurts too deep to heal,
To anger consuming and tearing my soul.
To dreaming to escape from everyone.
To wishing I could fade away forever,
To everyone who molded me into this.
To everyone who never saw the hurt,
To everyone who mocked and laughed.
To everyone who brushed past in a hurry,
To everyone who cared but never showed.
I hope you’re happy!
You made me and fixed me,
But you didn’t know I was never broken.
You saw an individual, and didn’t like it,
You could never accept me for me could you?
I hope you’re happy about how you made me,
I hope you remember what you did to me
When I slowly kill kill you and laugh.
I hope you realize as you slowly die,
You did this to me, you made me this way.
So in return, I will kill you and all around you.
You broke my spirit; my will and my soul.
Now as I break you, you’ll realize,
You never broke me, never tamed me.
I am still freer and more alive under restraints
Then you could ever even hope to be.
But now you are free, you are going to die.
You sealed your death when you tried to seal mine.
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To You

Contributed by Munchkin on Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 04:38:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

To you I’ve ever loved,
To those I’ve ever hurt,
To you I’ve held close,
To those I’ve pushed away,
To you I've wanted so badly,
To those I've lied to,
To you I've tried to change for,
To those I've changed because of,
To you who have kept me strong,
To those who have torn me down,
To you who stayed and loved me,
To those who left me for the crowds,
To you who made me smile through my tears,
To those who showed me life,
To you whom all my thoughts belong,
To those who gave me another chance.
To everyone who drove me to this:
To an emotional suicide,
To a deadness of heart no love can revive.
To a search for truth, wherever it may be,
To a longing for oneness with anyone.
To scars and hurts too deep to heal,
To anger consuming and tearing my soul.
To dreaming to escape from everyone.
To wishing I could fade away forever,
To everyone who molded me into this.
To everyone who never saw the hurt,
To everyone who mocked and laughed.
To everyone who brushed past in a hurry,
To everyone who cared but never showed.
I hope you’re happy!
You made me and fixed me,
But you didn’t know I was never broken.
You saw an individual, and didn’t like it,
You could never accept me for me could you?
I hope you’re happy about how you made me,
I hope you remember what you did to me
When I slowly kill kill you and laugh.
I hope you realize as you slowly die,
You did this to me, you made me this way.
So in return, I will kill you and all around you.
You broke my spirit; my will and my soul.
Now as I break you, you’ll realize,
You never broke me, never tamed me.
I am still freer and more alive under restraints
Then you could ever even hope to be.
But now you are free, you are going to die.
You sealed your death when you tried to seal mine.
This isn’t murder, you killed yourself.

Copyright Â© Munchkin ... [ 2007-01-02 16:38:07]
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Re: To You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 06:55:32 PM AEST
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a lot of repitition in the beginning...but not in a bad way.

i like this - a simple shout-out, of outrage...to those who have hurt you...but yet you are still strong in the end. you will repay every debt and every sin...

i love it...and you, are just amazing.

- Bethani -

Re: To You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 02:35:21 PM AEST
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Very powerful write. I felt the anger and agony ooze out of this. Great job!

Re: To You (User Rating: 1 )
by ofi93 on Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 08:05:22 PM AEST
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Nice; we can all relate to this..

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