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Array ( [sid] => 130030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Make Believe [time] => 2007-01-01 22:11:03 [hometext] => I really liked this poem I wrote, it's one of the hundred's of written. [bodytext] => I promised you,
Everything,
I broke them,
Like my dreams,
I shot down shooting stars,
Forget who we are,
Cause we lost me,
Cause I lost you,
I forgot everyone,
The nights under the sun,
I forgot the words we spoke,
I love you never made it real enough,
Though,
The people who followed us,
Through the rain,
Could see I’d never be the same,
I left my dreams with you,
You stole my heart too,
I want them back,
I’m starting to lack,
Everything I wanted from you,
Now you’re gone,
I want you,
I need you back right here,
In my heart,
I felt you,
You felt me,
We were perfect,
Like calm seas,
We could last long,
We could dance for hours,
Here,
To the same old song,
Some say I’m just imaging,
Everything last night,
Left me stranded,
In your heart,
How could you put me here?
I had you,
I believed every word you spoke,
Oh,
You lied to me,
Like I can understand?
You took from me,
Like you ever touched me hand?
I lived for you,
You took from me,
I took from you,
Was this make-believe?
Or maybe true?
But maybe we can make this real,
Tonight


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 22 [informant] => dreamer_luv421 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Make Believe

Contributed by dreamer_luv421 on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I promised you,
Everything,
I broke them,
Like my dreams,
I shot down shooting stars,
Forget who we are,
Cause we lost me,
Cause I lost you,
I forgot everyone,
The nights under the sun,
I forgot the words we spoke,
I love you never made it real enough,
Though,
The people who followed us,
Through the rain,
Could see I’d never be the same,
I left my dreams with you,
You stole my heart too,
I want them back,
I’m starting to lack,
Everything I wanted from you,
Now you’re gone,
I want you,
I need you back right here,
In my heart,
I felt you,
You felt me,
We were perfect,
Like calm seas,
We could last long,
We could dance for hours,
Here,
To the same old song,
Some say I’m just imaging,
Everything last night,
Left me stranded,
In your heart,
How could you put me here?
I had you,
I believed every word you spoke,
Oh,
You lied to me,
Like I can understand?
You took from me,
Like you ever touched me hand?
I lived for you,
You took from me,
I took from you,
Was this make-believe?
Or maybe true?
But maybe we can make this real,
Tonight






Copyright © dreamer_luv421 ... [ 2007-01-01 22:11:03]
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Re: Make Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:23:04 PM AEST
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Very good poem. I read it atleast ten times. I can relate to that so much it's a little scary.
Well keep up the good work.


Re: Make Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by Datimeisme on Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 08:04:23 PM AEST
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Its very interesting, good job




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