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Array ( [sid] => 130017 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Gravity Pressure [time] => 2007-01-01 03:08:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I tried to be happy
pretending so hard.
It made me feel crappy.
I don't want a new start.

So many beginnings
with only one end.
We all die one day
so make death your friend.

You have to wait for the time
setting and mood.
When it comes- you know-
it is brutal and crude.

It was today.
I had a knife in my hand
drawing thin ladders
on my blue veins.

New Years was the time
for me my friend.
But as I was drawing
I realized I'm scared.

What are you scared of?
What do you fear?
How can you not do it?
How do you dare?

There is a person I love
whom I don't want to leave.
And there are many things
I want to achieve.

He is just playing.
I know it, you too.
Come with me girl
I'm here to rescue you!

Dreams are for babies
I'll make you a chief.
Isn't no gravity pressure
what you want to achieve?

Go away death
and for a while don't show.
I will call you again
when I'll be ready to go.

And for the rest of the night
I cried and cried
over the fact that in that night
death entered my mind.
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No Gravity Pressure

Contributed by ediii on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 03:08:06 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I tried to be happy
pretending so hard.
It made me feel crappy.
I don't want a new start.

So many beginnings
with only one end.
We all die one day
so make death your friend.

You have to wait for the time
setting and mood.
When it comes- you know-
it is brutal and crude.

It was today.
I had a knife in my hand
drawing thin ladders
on my blue veins.

New Years was the time
for me my friend.
But as I was drawing
I realized I'm scared.

What are you scared of?
What do you fear?
How can you not do it?
How do you dare?

There is a person I love
whom I don't want to leave.
And there are many things
I want to achieve.

He is just playing.
I know it, you too.
Come with me girl
I'm here to rescue you!

Dreams are for babies
I'll make you a chief.
Isn't no gravity pressure
what you want to achieve?

Go away death
and for a while don't show.
I will call you again
when I'll be ready to go.

And for the rest of the night
I cried and cried
over the fact that in that night
death entered my mind.

Copyright © ediii ... [ 2007-01-01 03:08:06]
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Re: No Gravity Pressure (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 03:41:56 PM AEST
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Sad write here. Death finds us and ends our journey soon enough embrace the gifts, treasures and life God gave you and flourish in this new year.

~Michelle~

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