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Array ( [sid] => 130009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silent survival [time] => 2006-12-31 23:53:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I talk
but no one listens
I leave
no one says good bye,
I have no shadow
I'm just another face
in the crowd
passing by.

I lay awake at night
and in the day
I search
for something to believe
cause I know
all the sighing
and silent crying
is all for nothing
if I
don't break free.

My soul
ebbs and flows
as my essence
slowly
starts to fade....

I exsist
in chaos and confusion
everyday
something goes wrong,
it's such a struggle
to find the reasons
to go on. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 471 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Silent survival

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 11:53:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I talk
but no one listens
I leave
no one says good bye,
I have no shadow
I'm just another face
in the crowd
passing by.

I lay awake at night
and in the day
I search
for something to believe
cause I know
all the sighing
and silent crying
is all for nothing
if I
don't break free.

My soul
ebbs and flows
as my essence
slowly
starts to fade....

I exsist
in chaos and confusion
everyday
something goes wrong,
it's such a struggle
to find the reasons
to go on.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2006-12-31 23:53:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Silent survival (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 12:46:16 AM AEST
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I was listening to a song tonight, this write reminded of it...lyrics.

wish we could talk,
somehow we never do

don`t even ask me how my day has been
looks like one of those evenings again

we sit here like strangers
I don`t know you anymore..

"I knew you when" you needed me...

lyrics by..Oleta Adams.

good write, ..Crow

Re: Silent survival (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 04:57:35 PM AEST
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Sad and heart wrenching write, just the kind of poem I like to answer, Please do not be offended, its just a thought. Your poem is very good, well done. Sue x

But go on you must,
And weather the storm,
For one day you will find,
A new chapter is born,

You won't feel so distant,
You will at last belong,
For faith in yourself,
Will move you along.

Re: Silent survival (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 03:43:35 AM AEST
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It's a mad world out there friend but u know u gots me.
huggs,
emy

Re: Silent survival (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 10:46:29 PM AEST
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Hmm tough subject with excellent composition and highly confessional. From your first post to this there is a theme of Invisibility that captures both H.G. Wells and Ralph Ellison's take.

Well Done

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: Silent survival (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 07:36:09 PM AEST
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Emotional. I liked it. Nicely done.

Re: Silent survival (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 03:43:23 AM AEST
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as my essence
slowly
starts to fade
words that exist in every sentence i say
your words speak to me in ways i cant yet understand let there be more

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