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Hear the whispers, hear the whispers
Of the wind atop the trees
The voice of mother moon
As it rustles through the leaves

Feel the turnings, feel the turnings
Of the earth beneath your feet
The rumbling of the mountains
As stone and heavens meet

See the shadows, see the shadows
Dancing to the tune
In the ebb and flow of landscape
And the song of ancient moon [comments] => 6 [counter] => 332 [topic] => 27 [informant] => spike [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 45 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Old Grace

Contributed by spike on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 08:01:29 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Hear the whispers, hear the whispers
Of the wind atop the trees
The voice of mother moon
As it rustles through the leaves

Feel the turnings, feel the turnings
Of the earth beneath your feet
The rumbling of the mountains
As stone and heavens meet

See the shadows, see the shadows
Dancing to the tune
In the ebb and flow of landscape
And the song of ancient moon

Copyright © spike ... [ 2006-12-31 20:01:29]
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Re: Old Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 08:25:32 PM AEST
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Loved the poem, flowing and a peaceful ebb and flow of nature calling the pic set it in stone.

Michelle

Re: Old Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 10:41:54 PM AEST
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Spike....Damn I really loved this piece. Nice and earthy. I loved the rhythmic flow. Moved me right along like the drumbeat of my Mother Earth. Fantastic feel. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Old Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 01:01:35 AM AEST
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Oh how I love hearing the beautiful satellite called by that name .. Mother Moon.
She is, indeed lovely, no? And what an enchanting picture you have placed here for us ..

This piece is captivating, S. It has the very feel of Keats, dear poet. The last line of
the last stanza is incredibly heart-stirring. Dreamy and filled with such plesant notions ..
like sleeping under the stars ~

Your mastery with the written word is completely evident, dear poet. And the thoughts
you provoke with those words are endless and softly profound. Inescapable beauty
here, Spike. Sincerely ~

~Breezy
(Happy New Year)

Re: Old Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 09:32:12 PM AEST
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awesome poem.. makes you feel at one with the night time and feel like your out in nature.. loved the wording too great job

vampyress Jenni

Re: Old Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 12:00:19 AM AEST
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Very beautifull graphics and incredibly written.
huggs,
emy

Re: Old Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 08:50:43 PM AEST
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Spike dear fellow poet your work is always so impressive and a delight to read. You captivate your reader and take them on a journey into the night and a view of the gracious moon. A wonderful write thanks for sharing it with us.
love, hugs n prayers from ur fan/friend,
sue m

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