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There is a place that lovers seek
a so called paradise
With coconut filled palm trees,
white sands and a deep blue sea.

Would we lay on the sand,
with a cocktail on hand?

Would you look in my eyes
and believe in this paradise?

The island birds will sing a song of love
and will stand face to face
on that so called paradise
An island, our secret place. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 2 [informant] => DrowningHeart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Paradise

Contributed by DrowningHeart on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 11:52:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

There is a place that lovers seek
a so called paradise
With coconut filled palm trees,
white sands and a deep blue sea.

Would we lay on the sand,
with a cocktail on hand?

Would you look in my eyes
and believe in this paradise?

The island birds will sing a song of love
and will stand face to face
on that so called paradise
An island, our secret place.

Copyright © DrowningHeart ... [ 2006-12-31 11:52:45]
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Re: Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 12:07:21 PM AEST
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I like this and imagine it was first written in steam on a shared mirror between moments...

Good Job

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 02:44:53 PM AEST
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An Island paradise
sweet
I like it

Re: Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by CuriousitysCat on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:29:39 PM AEST
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I dig it. It kinda felt like a feeling i get sometimes where I am completely over stimulated in all the right ways and life just couldn't get better. A good thought to have in the back of one's mind every now and then.

;]

~Jazz

Re: Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 12:28:28 PM AEST
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I like it, but I think it may have been a bit overdone, worked over. But that's just me, you know your ben better than anyone else. I like the last stanza best, a good ending.
Take care,
David

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